From owner-freebsd-doc Thu Dec 13 16:30:27 2001 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.FreeBSD.org [216.136.204.21]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 68DB937B41A for ; Thu, 13 Dec 2001 16:30:01 -0800 (PST) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.11.6/8.11.6) id fBE0U1Z01106; Thu, 13 Dec 2001 16:30:01 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from gnats) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.FreeBSD.org [216.136.204.21]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 21F1B37B405 for ; Thu, 13 Dec 2001 16:21:12 -0800 (PST) Received: (from nobody@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.11.6/8.11.6) id fBE0LCH00161; Thu, 13 Dec 2001 16:21:12 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from nobody) Message-Id: <200112140021.fBE0LCH00161@freefall.freebsd.org> Date: Thu, 13 Dec 2001 16:21:12 -0800 (PST) From: Hiten Pandya To: freebsd-gnats-submit@freebsd.org X-Send-Pr-Version: www-1.0 Subject: docs/32818: [PATCH] - Formal Text for /docproj/who.html Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org >Number: 32818 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [PATCH] - Formal Text for /docproj/who.html >Confidential: no >Severity: serious >Priority: high >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: change-request >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Thu Dec 13 16:30:01 PST 2001 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Hiten Pandya >Release: 5.0-CURRENT >Organization: >Environment: FreeBSD hpdi.ath.cx 5.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT #1: Wed Dec 12 00:34:45 GMT 2001 hitenp@hpdi.ath.cx:/usr/obj/data/dev/src/sys/CURRENT5 i386 >Description: the patch i have attached will replace some of the informal, and sloppy (sorry bout my bluntness) bits of http://www.FreeBSD.org/docproj/who.html with more formal text and better stucture. The reason for this is very obvious; translaters will find it easy to translate. If you like the patch, submit it, dont like it? comment on it. :-) >How-To-Repeat: n/a / visit http://www.FreeBSD.org/docproj/who.html >Fix: *** who.sgml.old Thu Dec 13 23:34:07 2001 --- who.sgml Thu Dec 13 23:47:14 2001 *************** *** 13,25 **** FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.ORG.

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