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Subject: svn commit: r47546 - head/de_DE.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails
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Author: bhd
Date: Tue Oct 13 20:13:24 2015
New Revision: 47546
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47546

Log:
  Update to r42035:
  
  Minor edits for punctuation and clarity.  Space callouts to align evenly
  so they do not look like part of the content.

Modified:
  head/de_DE.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml

Modified: head/de_DE.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/de_DE.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml	Tue Oct 13 09:04:43 2015	(r47545)
+++ head/de_DE.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml	Tue Oct 13 20:13:24 2015	(r47546)
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 
     $FreeBSD$
     $FreeBSDde: de-docproj/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml,v 1.23 2011/05/25 20:42:25 jkois Exp $
-    basiert auf: r40792
+    basiert auf: r42035
 -->
 <chapter xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0" xml:id="jails">
   <info><title>Jails</title>
@@ -243,9 +243,7 @@
 	  <para>Einen Befehl (genauer den Pfad einer ausführbaren
 	    Datei) der innerhalb der Jail ausgeführt werden soll.
 	    Dieser Pfad wird relativ zum root-Verzeichnis einer
-	    Jail-Umgebung angegeben und kann sehr unterschiedlich
-	    aussehen (je nachdem, wie die Jail-Umgebung konfiguriert
-	    wurde).</para>
+	    Jail-Umgebung angegeben.</para>
 	</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
 
@@ -278,13 +276,13 @@
       eine konzeptuelle Unterscheidung, die Einrichtung einer
       Jail bleibt davon gänzlich unberührt.</para>
 
-    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>setenv D /hier/ist/die/jail</userinput>
-&prompt.root; <userinput>mkdir -p $D</userinput> <co xml:id="jailpath"/>
+    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>setenv D <replaceable>/hier/ist/die/jail</replaceable></userinput>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>mkdir -p $D</userinput>      <co xml:id="jailpath"/>
 &prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/src</userinput>
-&prompt.root; <userinput>make buildworld</userinput> <co xml:id="jailbuildworld"/>
-&prompt.root; <userinput>make installworld DESTDIR=$D</userinput> <co xml:id="jailinstallworld"/>
-&prompt.root; <userinput>make distribution DESTDIR=$D</userinput> <co xml:id="jaildistrib"/>
-&prompt.root; <userinput>mount -t devfs devfs $D/dev</userinput> <co xml:id="jaildevfs"/></screen>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>make buildworld</userinput>  <co xml:id="jailbuildworld"/>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>make installworld DESTDIR=$D</userinput>  <co xml:id="jailinstallworld"/>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>make distribution DESTDIR=$D</userinput>  <co xml:id="jaildistrib"/>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>mount -t devfs devfs $D/dev</userinput>   <co xml:id="jaildevfs"/></screen>
 
     <calloutlist>
       <callout arearefs="jailpath">