From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Feb 14 19:10:09 2011 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 65D12106564A for ; Mon, 14 Feb 2011 19:10:09 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::28]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3B6448FC0C for ; Mon, 14 Feb 2011 19:10:09 +0000 (UTC) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id p1EJA9LW092383 for ; Mon, 14 Feb 2011 19:10:09 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) id p1EJA9Sw092381; Mon, 14 Feb 2011 19:10:09 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Date: Mon, 14 Feb 2011 19:10:09 GMT Message-Id: <201102141910.p1EJA9Sw092381@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org From: Jason Helfman Cc: Subject: Re: docs/154766: [PATCH] Fix typos in freebsd-update-server article X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: Jason Helfman List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 14 Feb 2011 19:10:09 -0000 The following reply was made to PR docs/154766; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Jason Helfman To: Sahil Tandon Cc: bug-followup@freebsd.org, doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/154766: [PATCH] Fix typos in freebsd-update-server article Date: Mon, 14 Feb 2011 10:59:52 -0800 Adding a grammatical fix to this, as well. I am okay with this fix. Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/jhelfman/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.1 diff -u -r1.1 article.sgml --- en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml 13 Feb 2011 17:53:26 -0000 1.1 +++ en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml 14 Feb 2011 18:53:16 -0000 @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ url="&url.base;/cgi/cvsweb.cgi/projects/freebsd-update-server/">freebsd-update-server software is written by &a.cperciva;, current Security Officer of &os;. For users that think it is convenient to update their systems - against an official update server, building an own &fbus.ap; may + against an official update server, building their own &fbus.ap; may help to extend its functionality by supporting manually-tweaked &os; releases or by providing a local mirror that will allow faster updates for a number of machines. @@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ It is sourced during all build operations. Here is the default build.conf, which should - be modified to suite your own environment. + be modified to suit your own environment. @@ -789,7 +789,7 @@ Adding flags to buildworld and obj targets in the - scripts/build.subr script, may speed up + scripts/build.subr script may speed up processing depending on the hardware used, however it is not necessary. Using these flags in other targets is not recommended, as it may cause the build to become unreliable. -- Jason Helfman System Administrator experts-exchange.com http://www.experts-exchange.com/M_4830110.html E4AD 7CF1 1396 27F6 79DD 4342 5E92 AD66 8C8C FBA5