From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jan 13 16:58:57 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.FreeBSD.org [8.8.178.115]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 83D991C7 for ; Sun, 13 Jan 2013 16:58:57 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from dru.lavigne@att.net) Received: from nm21-vm0.access.bullet.mail.sp2.yahoo.com (nm21-vm0.access.bullet.mail.sp2.yahoo.com [98.139.44.176]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 63E89F1D for ; Sun, 13 Jan 2013 16:58:56 +0000 (UTC) Received: from [98.139.44.98] by nm21.access.bullet.mail.sp2.yahoo.com with NNFMP; 13 Jan 2013 16:58:50 -0000 Received: from [98.139.44.88] by tm3.access.bullet.mail.sp2.yahoo.com with NNFMP; 13 Jan 2013 16:58:50 -0000 Received: from [127.0.0.1] by omp1025.access.mail.sp2.yahoo.com with NNFMP; 13 Jan 2013 16:58:50 -0000 X-Yahoo-Newman-Property: ymail-3 X-Yahoo-Newman-Id: 860342.99636.bm@omp1025.access.mail.sp2.yahoo.com Received: (qmail 4335 invoked by uid 60001); 13 Jan 2013 16:58:50 -0000 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=att.net; s=s1024; t=1358096330; bh=JE5D7tfQvVGeDnHajG8ETVmdQwIxvCJSwLjrn6RYyxo=; h=X-YMail-OSG:Received:X-Rocket-MIMEInfo:X-Mailer:Message-ID:Date:From:Subject:To:In-Reply-To:MIME-Version:Content-Type:Content-Transfer-Encoding; b=f3NEKY6NNr//rWcI1K3WNxrtsH1VjDgoZTGxS6OL1NEUNqjb6qLKI8vVGAWTv+kI78jTBn3QHmDiQTz/nsnvJc9QOZ2ZrtbjUzrr8gffBRoho1/knkudZ7zT3+fzQmH1kN3rtiSkfdRdJx3j9WZ3HvO4AOJJuwTrVfL6J2qaPas= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; q=dns; c=nofws; s=s1024; d=att.net; h=X-YMail-OSG:Received:X-Rocket-MIMEInfo:X-Mailer:Message-ID:Date:From:Subject:To:In-Reply-To:MIME-Version:Content-Type:Content-Transfer-Encoding; b=qAf9Q1oat15QI0JfBS7I2INJOnggII00mvA3mSZQkvp31doaLO1o41DFdzCFEjvayPGG0knUT/nq7MnFgeq5hF1nMt7fgrsMOW0Lpw8f/27nHmG5IsZ+bUEbcpt8d3oOhFdtGBeKKb5+bx+ztAFB48NchHIDdIE57xVAoiOeJ2Q=; X-YMail-OSG: ENMKQV0VM1lMFhq7hhuc3L7QtxvSwwP7.VsM0KQ2Uaa_yxD hD9.ccCuopOU0dWkX.8h8zOWxKQ37AQGQuKdylV8ddFgcsbHS5NoX.lraZQw Yiqo29KFp3PsrLCw7Qp_OPlwMp3dtbUzJ8PBGoDrwoJvTfQVf74zOfeahwdk leX_Zf5t2GDU2cOqZOKloYryVpFilcd1BAtSKeOtOz32b.yheytlXFkUpmpk LGq53dGkuaW4BD7SdxO31we1YrRCAebCdKhEj5ZanxSxG1zf0y38cu8m2RCV gWHYBKtrWF6PAnRMzl6rZzrzLqykNKYxL3kDMCxFY6P19GebFFbRqtV49HX8 VsHYBSbu9KMtdLrs2HQSWzKUu8a9Lu6_A8UuilzI0Z9NJq.nP.6BRSKi.Jxg _dTYTAuZMBJMYoshZIIddcsrSMrP4jMgr1tZjae9SS1ivFntpr4LWXMy96Uq N.4C1uQ-- Received: from [99.98.82.135] by web184906.mail.gq1.yahoo.com via HTTP; Sun, 13 Jan 2013 08:58:50 PST X-Rocket-MIMEInfo: 001.001, Cgo.ID4.IE9uIEZyaSwgSmFuIDExLCAyMDEzIGF0IDAyOjMxOjUyUE0gLTA4MDAsIERydQo.IExhdmlnbmUgd3JvdGU6Cj4gPj4.IEF0dGFjaGVkIGlzIHRoZSBzdm4gZGlmZiBmb3IgdGhlIFgxMSBjaGFwdGVyLgo.IFRoaXMKPiA.PiByZXByZXNlbnRzIGEKPiA.Pj4gY29tcGxldGUgY29udGVudCB1cGRhdGUgb2YgdGhpcyBjaGFwdGVyLgo.ID4.PiAKPiA.Pj4gSWdvciBpcyBtb3N0bHkgaGFwcHkuIEkgdGhpbmsgdGhlIHJlbWFpbmluZwo.IGluZGVudAo.ID4.IGVycm9ycyBhcmUgZmFsc2UKPiA.Pj4gd2EBMAEBAQE- X-Mailer: YahooMailClassic/15.1.2 YahooMailWebService/0.8.130.494 Message-ID: <1358096330.196.YahooMailClassic@web184906.mail.gq1.yahoo.com> Date: Sun, 13 Jan 2013 08:58:50 -0800 (PST) From: Dru Lavigne Subject: Re: [patch] content changes to X11 chapter To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org In-Reply-To: <50F2CC15.3070800@FreeBSD.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 13 Jan 2013 16:58:57 -0000 =0A=0A> >> On Fri, Jan 11, 2013 at 02:31:52PM -0800, Dru=0A> Lavigne wrote:= =0A> >>> Attached is the svn diff for the X11 chapter.=0A> This=0A> >> repr= esents a=0A> >>> complete content update of this chapter.=0A> >>> =0A> >>> = Igor is mostly happy. I think the remaining=0A> indent=0A> >> errors are fa= lse=0A> >>> warnings as they only occur when an inline tag=0A> is in=0A> >>= the previous=0A> >>> .=0A> >>> =0A> >>> I did not verify the widescr= een settings. I=0A> think the=0A> >> i810 section is=0A> >>> correct. The K= DM section needs more content.=0A> Other than=0A> >> that, it is a=0A> >>> = decent first pass at bringing this chapter into=0A> the=0A> >> 21st century= .=0A> >>> =0A> >> =0A> >> Some thoughts:=0A> >> =0A> >> - the whole diff wi= ll be difficult to read for a=0A> translator: =0A> >> section moves, whites= pace & content changes,=0A> etc. It will be=0A> >> important to commit in s= eparate parts: for example:=0A> 1st section =0A> >> moves/removals, 2nd add= ition & content changes=0A> and 3rd =0A> >> whitespace/indentation changes;= =0A> >> =0A> >> - you removed the prerequisite of knowing how to=0A> use po= rts, I=0A> >> think it's important to know how to get a ports=0A> tree befo= re using=0A> >> the ports;=0A> >> =0A> >> - you removed the way to get a lo= calized keyboard=0A> for people not=0A> >> using a desktop manager.=A0 Well= this=0A> configuration is not easy to=0A> >> guess for a newcomer.=A0 Mayb= e it can be kept=0A> somewhere in the =0A> >> chapter.=0A> >> =0A> >> - Wha= t is # in Crtl+Alt+F#?=0A> > =0A> > =0A> > Please note that the whitespace = changes were sent as a=0A> separate=0A> > patch ([patch] white space only f= ix for handbook x11=0A> chapter) on=0A> > the 10th. It is my understanding = that the first patch=0A> will be=0A> > applied to the handbook repo while t= he second content=0A> patch will=0A> > most likely be applied to the print = edition repo.=0A=0A=0AMy bad, I didn't realize the white-space patch had al= ready been committed. I will redo this and send the patches by Tuesday.=0A= =0ACheers,=0A=0ADru