From owner-freebsd-doc Tue Dec 24 1: 0:28 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A478E37B405 for ; Tue, 24 Dec 2002 01:00:25 -0800 (PST) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 49CD143EDE for ; Tue, 24 Dec 2002 01:00:25 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.6/8.12.6) with ESMTP id gBO90PNS036691 for ; Tue, 24 Dec 2002 01:00:25 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.6/8.12.6/Submit) id gBO90Phl036690; Tue, 24 Dec 2002 01:00:25 -0800 (PST) Date: Tue, 24 Dec 2002 01:00:25 -0800 (PST) Message-Id: <200212240900.gBO90Phl036690@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: From: Tom Rhodes Subject: Re: docs/46511: Small fixes for VPN article Reply-To: Tom Rhodes Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org The following reply was made to PR docs/46511; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Tom Rhodes To: "Jon O." Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/46511: Small fixes for VPN article Date: Tue, 24 Dec 2002 03:56:33 -0500 On Tue, 24 Dec 2002 00:43:15 -0800 (PST) "Jon O." wrote: > >Description: > Just some small fixes to some links, etc. in the VPN doc > >How-To-Repeat: > >Fix: > --- article.sgml Mon Dec 23 14:38:17 2002 > +++ article.jono.sgml Tue Dec 24 00:31:17 2002 > @@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ > FW-1 Protected Nets Internal Nets > 199.208.192.0/24 > 192.168.10.0/24 > > - The FreeBSD gateway (GW serves as a > firewall and+ The FreeBSD gateway GW > serves as a firewall and > NAT device for internal > nets. > > The FreeBSD kernel must be compiled to support IPSec. > @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ > options IPSEC_DEBUG > > For instructions on building a custom kernel, refer to the > - url="http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x3663. > html">+ url="http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernel > config.html"> > FreeBSD handbook. Please note that > IP protocol 50 (ESP) and > UDP port 500 must be open > between the Firewall-1 > @@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ > (Do not use our example.) > > Support Aggressive Mode: Checked > -Supports Subnets: Checked > +Supports Subnets: Checked > > After setting the pre-shared secret in the Firewall-1 > Network > Object definition, place this secret in > @@ -213,8 +213,8 @@ > # IP addresses > # > # External Interface External Interface > -# 208.229.100.6 216.218.197.2 > -# | | > +# 208.229.100.6 216.218.197.2 > +# | | > # +--> Firewall-1 <--> Internet <--> FreeBSD GW > <--+# | | > # FW-1 Protected Nets Internal Nets > @@ -304,7 +304,7 @@ > #certificate_type x509 "" ""; > > nonce_size 16; > - lifetime time 10 min; # sec,min,hour > + lifetime time 10 min; # sec,min,hour > lifetime byte 5 MB; # B,KB,GB > initial_contact on; > support_mip6 on; > @@ -329,7 +329,7 @@ > } > > Ensure that > /usr/local/etc/racoon/psk.txt > - contains the shared secret configured in the "Firewall-1 > Network Object+ contains the pre-shared secret configured in the > "Firewall-1 Network Object > Configuration" section of this document and has mode > 600 permissions. Ok, we have some whitespace fixes && some content fixes here, I'll handle them. Noone else need take a worry. Thanks! -- Tom Rhodes To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message