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Hello,

"Resorces for Newvies" page,
http://www.freebsd.org/projects/newbies.html

>The first thing many people need to set up is ppp, and there is a lot of documentation
>to help. You might start with at least those parts of the Handbook that are relevant
>to your needs, and explore the ppp page for links to the other valuable information
>and the latest updates.

 "The first thing many people need to set up is ppp,..."

 Do you agree?

 I suspect that many people need not set up ppp these days.

 How about the following patch?

diff -u -r1.58 newbies.sgml
--- newbies.sgml	9 Aug 2009 12:58:45 -0000	1.58
+++ newbies.sgml	9 Dec 2010 13:23:06 -0000
@@ -70,9 +70,8 @@
           beginners.  You do not have to know much about anything to enjoy
           this one.</p></li>

-      <li><p>The first thing many people need to set up is ppp, and there is
-          a lot of documentation to help. You might start with at least those
-          parts of the
+      <li><p>There is a lot of documentation to help for setting up ppp.
+	  You might start with at least those parts of the
           <a href="&url.books;/handbook/index.html">Handbook</a>
           that are relevant to your needs, and explore the
           <a href="http://www.awfulhak.org/ppp.html">ppp page</a>

Regards,
  Ryusuke

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