From owner-freebsd-doc Sat Feb 2 5:50:22 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from blueyonder.co.uk (pcow058o.blueyonder.co.uk [195.188.53.98]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8445B37B423; Sat, 2 Feb 2002 05:49:49 -0800 (PST) Received: from pcow058m.blueyonder.co.uk ([127.0.0.1]) by blueyonder.co.uk with Microsoft SMTPSVC(5.5.1877.757.75); Sat, 2 Feb 2002 12:38:54 +0000 Received: from fluoxetine.lan (unverified [62.31.193.116]) by pcow058m.blueyonder.co.uk (Content Technologies SMTPRS 4.2.9) with ESMTP id ; Sat, 2 Feb 2002 12:38:54 +0000 Date: Sat, 2 Feb 2002 12:39:42 +0000 (GMT) From: Andrew McKay X-X-Sender: andy@fluoxetine.lan To: "Gary W. Swearingen" Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG, Subject: Re: docs/34524: [PATCH] - Add important pre-installation notice In-Reply-To: <0k3d0kk4ip.d0k@localhost.localdomain> Message-ID: <20020202121219.A62300-100000@fluoxetine.lan> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org On 1 Feb 2002, Gary W. Swearingen wrote: > Looks good to me. I tend to not like preachy docs, so I'd probably > leave out that last bit of advice, but it's OK. See revised patch below. Did you mean lose the whole second paragraph? I think pointing out the seriousness of this step is important so I've left in the bit about the fact that the process CAN go wrong but removed the bit telling people not to do it. I would hope that being told your motherboard could be permanently destroyed pretty much implies 'do not do this unless you have a compelling reason'. The whole paragraph could go if it's a problem. > And I'd change "fails to work" to "fails,", but that's OK as-is too. > One more -- I'd probably change "Many" to "Some" at the beginning. Agreed. 'fails to work' sounds worse on a re-read and 'Many' implies a greater frequency than is actually true. > (Is this what they call bikeshedding, or is it more-or-less welcome?) Constructive criticism is something that I always find worthwhile. Thanks :) -- also at: http://www.openirc.co.uk/freebsd/install.diff --- chapter.sgml Sat Feb 2 12:18:14 2002 +++ chapter.sgml.new Sat Feb 2 12:22:45 2002 @@ -4553,6 +4553,18 @@ questions and answers for people wishing to dual-boot FreeBSD with MS-DOS. + + Some installation problems can be avoided or alleviated by + updating the firmware on various hardware components, most notably the + motherboard. If the installation fails then updating the BIOS may + solve the problem. Refer to your motherboard manufacturer's website + for information on BIOS revisions and upgrade instructions. + Most manufacturers strongly advise against upgrading motherboard + BIOSs unless you have a good reason for doing so. The + process CAN go wrong, causing the BIOS to be + permanently destroyed. + + What to Do If Something Goes Wrong... -- -- Andrew McKay To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message