From owner-freebsd-doc Thu May 16 20:44:14 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mail.reppep.com (www.reppep.com [64.81.19.108]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 78C3337B412; Thu, 16 May 2002 20:43:59 -0700 (PDT) Received: from [64.81.19.109] (g4.reppep.com [64.81.19.109]) by mail.reppep.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8FF6617C10; Thu, 16 May 2002 22:45:39 -0400 (EDT) Mime-Version: 1.0 X-Sender: pepper@mail.reppep.com Message-Id: In-Reply-To: <20020516131122.516afea5.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> References: <20020516164330.GA96701@hades.hell.gr> <20020516131122.516afea5.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> Date: Thu, 16 May 2002 23:39:39 -0400 To: Tom Rhodes From: Chris Pepper Subject: Re: [PATCH] Cc: Giorgos Keramidas , FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.org Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" ; format="flowed" Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org At 1:11 PM -0400 2002/05/16, Tom Rhodes wrote: >On Thu, 16 May 2002 19:43:30 +0300 >Giorgos Keramidas wrote: > >> On 2002-05-15 23:29, Chris Pepper wrote: >> >> You don't really need the whitespace change (moving 'or' at the >> beginning of the last paragraph line). >> >> You might want to make `this' mode explicit, with something like: >> >> If you checked out a ``point in time'', then >> cvs will do nothing, unless ... >> >> What do you think? Actually, the real change was addition of 'this' and a comma; or was on one of the touched lines, so I reflowed it. I wouldn't submit a patch just to fix wrapping. I think it's clear with my patch. >- checked out. If you checked out a ``point in time'', does >- nothing unless the tags have moved in the repository or >- some other weird stuff is going on.

>+ checked out. If you checked out a ``point in time'', this >+ does nothing, unless the tags have moved in the repository >+ or some other weird stuff is going on.

>I think, and not to discourage contributions, as we need them, that >Chris review the FreeBSD Documentation Project Primer before this >change be evaulated. The only reason I say this, is because it seems >more like this document is getting a modification in its html state >over the sgml state it should be. > >Chris, could you please review it at >http://www.FreeBSD.org/docproj/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer >so you can have a better understanding of DocBook, SGML, and the >wonderful ways its put to use in the primer. Will do. I hadn't found that doc yet (fyi, I have to remove 'docproj' to get ), but will work on SGML instead of HTML renders. If that's recommended reading for doc submitters, it should probably be listed on . Chris -- Chris Pepper: Rockefeller University: To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message