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Date: Thu, 16 May 2002 23:39:39 -0400
To: Tom Rhodes
From: Chris Pepper
Subject: Re: [PATCH]
Cc: Giorgos Keramidas ,
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At 1:11 PM -0400 2002/05/16, Tom Rhodes wrote:
>On Thu, 16 May 2002 19:43:30 +0300
>Giorgos Keramidas wrote:
>
>> On 2002-05-15 23:29, Chris Pepper wrote:
>>
>> You don't really need the whitespace change (moving 'or' at the
>> beginning of the last paragraph line).
>>
>> You might want to make `this' mode explicit, with something like:
>>
>> If you checked out a ``point in time'', then
>> cvs will do nothing, unless ...
>>
>> What do you think?
Actually, the real change was addition of 'this' and a comma;
or was on one of the touched lines, so I reflowed it. I wouldn't
submit a patch just to fix wrapping. I think it's clear with my patch.
>- checked out. If you checked out a ``point in time'', does
>- nothing unless the tags have moved in the repository or
>- some other weird stuff is going on.
>+ checked out. If you checked out a ``point in time'', this
>+ does nothing, unless the tags have moved in the repository
>+ or some other weird stuff is going on.
>I think, and not to discourage contributions, as we need them, that
>Chris review the FreeBSD Documentation Project Primer before this
>change be evaulated. The only reason I say this, is because it seems
>more like this document is getting a modification in its html state
>over the sgml state it should be.
>
>Chris, could you please review it at
>http://www.FreeBSD.org/docproj/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer
>so you can have a better understanding of DocBook, SGML, and the
>wonderful ways its put to use in the primer.
Will do. I hadn't found that doc yet (fyi, I have to remove
'docproj' to get
), but
will work on SGML instead of HTML renders.
If that's recommended reading for doc submitters, it should
probably be listed on .
Chris
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