From owner-svn-src-all@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Apr 27 17:55:54 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-src-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6810B106566C; Tue, 27 Apr 2010 17:55:54 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from minimarmot@gmail.com) Received: from ey-out-2122.google.com (ey-out-2122.google.com [74.125.78.27]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 736DF8FC14; Tue, 27 Apr 2010 17:55:53 +0000 (UTC) Received: by ey-out-2122.google.com with SMTP id 22so338733eye.3 for ; Tue, 27 Apr 2010 10:55:45 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=domainkey-signature:mime-version:received:received:in-reply-to :references:date:message-id:subject:from:to:cc:content-type; bh=GbK042Xq24LGMOMafC9HQb3o9xdzk72iY4QkEDUkMsU=; b=ORSWDCtOKSsH7MXMkesDFfosMqUHsdNh6haYi3uO4wtc3ycdq/Co/8ImTCniAMOuF0 MSQBV7Fo0mEwU78AuISFNN6QPEboHOKAOFUibxgeHiYpNCAkKTrV4HPeguiCxDlF1CA6 BtOEgP3vQhOL7HLr2iEgBJR80zIJSfggiCrN8= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:date:message-id:subject:from:to :cc:content-type; b=xcZXolxt1ZrsG7MQVjHVySaMKdXeDE2ibGzxBs9rYSUcrpqru2N2vUTNNprBcqjnZI pTWcM9C+NY7XHE2cOanuLPbuLfTm5JiYVoQZr1PSjmTpopGJFu+JTbaWe3pATecDzkd7 1SeFptWhvYnQuqQD/TLgsvb9+/fXOHAHi4J6U= MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.213.74.13 with SMTP id s13mr2454441ebj.35.1272390945674; Tue, 27 Apr 2010 10:55:45 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.213.33.140 with HTTP; Tue, 27 Apr 2010 10:55:45 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: <201004271750.o3RHoi8G078883@svn.freebsd.org> References: <201004271750.o3RHoi8G078883@svn.freebsd.org> Date: Tue, 27 Apr 2010 13:55:45 -0400 Message-ID: From: Ben Kaduk To: Xin LI Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Cc: svn-src-head@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, src-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r207283 - head/usr.bin/gzip X-BeenThere: svn-src-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire src tree \(except for " user" and " projects" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 27 Apr 2010 17:55:54 -0000 On Tue, Apr 27, 2010 at 1:50 PM, Xin LI wrote: > Author: delphij > Date: Tue Apr 27 17:50:43 2010 > New Revision: 207283 > URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/207283 > > Log: > Language improvements to make the BUGS section easier to read. > > Reviewed by: Alexander Best > MFC after: 13 days > > Modified: > head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 > > Modified: head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 > ============================================================================== > --- head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 Tue Apr 27 15:59:38 2010 (r207282) > +++ head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 Tue Apr 27 17:50:43 2010 (r207283) > @@ -218,8 +218,8 @@ with unpack support written by > .An Xin LI Aq delphij@FreeBSD.org . > .Sh BUGS > According to RFC 1952, the recorded file size is stored in a 32-bit > -integer and therefore it can not represent files that is bigger than > -4GB in size. This limitation also applies to > +integer, therefore, it can not represent files larger than 4GB. > +This limitation also applies to Still not quite right -- the old version was wrong because it had "files that is" instead of "files that are". The new version has a comma splice, though -- the comma in "32-bit integer, therefore" should be replaced with either a semicolon or a full stop. I would probably also put in two "the"s in the text following this change -- "the -l option" and "the gzip utility". -Ben Kaduk > .Fl l > option of > .Nm > _______________________________________________ > svn-src-head@freebsd.org mailing list > http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-src-head > To unsubscribe, send any mail to "svn-src-head-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" >