From owner-freebsd-doc Fri May 3 13: 0:15 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.FreeBSD.org [216.136.204.21]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A3AF137B419 for ; Fri, 3 May 2002 13:00:02 -0700 (PDT) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.11.6/8.11.6) id g43K02N57197; Fri, 3 May 2002 13:00:02 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats) Received: from gothic.blackend.org (blackend.org [212.11.50.35]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8020237B41B for ; Fri, 3 May 2002 12:59:15 -0700 (PDT) Received: from gothic.blackend.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by gothic.blackend.org (8.12.3/8.12.3/ - 15/04/02) with ESMTP id g43Jx7Xj079519 for ; Fri, 3 May 2002 21:59:07 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from marc@gothic.blackend.org) Received: (from marc@localhost) by gothic.blackend.org (8.12.3/8.12.3/Submit) id g43Jx7tG079518; Fri, 3 May 2002 21:59:07 +0200 (CEST) Message-Id: <200205031959.g43Jx7tG079518@gothic.blackend.org> Date: Fri, 3 May 2002 21:59:07 +0200 (CEST) From: Marc Fonvieille Reply-To: Marc Fonvieille To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Subject: docs/37722: Punctuation typos in section 2.3 of the Handbook Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org >Number: 37722 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Punctuation typos in section 2.3 of the Handbook >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Fri May 03 13:00:02 PDT 2002 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Marc Fonvieille >Release: FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD gothic.blackend.org 4.5-STABLE FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE #0: Fri Apr 19 12:13:41 CEST 2002 marc@gothic.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/GOTHIC i386 >Description: In section 2.3 of the Handbook, periods are used instead of colons, and a comma instead of a period. Look below at the patch for more details. >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: Apply the patch to handbook/installation/chapter.sgml --- chapter.sgml.diff begins here --- --- chapter.sgml.org Fri May 3 21:47:09 2002 +++ chapter.sgml Fri May 3 21:46:35 2002 @@ -592,7 +592,7 @@ By default, the installation will not make any changes to your - disk(s) until you see the following message. + disk(s) until you see the following message: Last Chance: Are you SURE your want continue the installation? @@ -726,7 +726,7 @@ Irrespective of whether you booted from floppy or CDROM, the - boot process will then get to this point. + boot process will then get to this point: Hit [Enter] to boot immediately, or any other key for command prompt. Booting [kernel] in 9 seconds... _ @@ -785,7 +785,7 @@ Irrespective of whether you booted from floppy or CDROM, the - boot process will then get to this point. + boot process will then get to this point: Hit [Enter] to boot immediately, or any other key for command prompt. Booting [kernel] in 9 seconds... _ @@ -1044,7 +1044,7 @@ You can now save these changes, and move on to the next step of the install. Press Q to quit the device - configuration interface. This message will appear. + configuration interface. This message will appear: Save these parameters before exiting? ([Y]es/[N]o/[C]ancel) @@ -1077,7 +1077,7 @@ turns on scrolling in the display. You can then use the arrow keys, or PageUp and PageDown to view the results. Press Scroll Lock again to stop - scrolling, + scrolling. Do this now, to review the text that scrolled off the screen when the kernel was carrying out the device probes. You will see text --- chapter.sgml.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message