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>Number:         29852
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Two mistypings in fdp-primer
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       medium
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Aug 18 13:10:00 PDT 2001
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Vladimir Tchoukharev
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.4-PRERELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD h33.erkki.ton.tut.fi 4.4-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 4.4-PRERELEASE #3: Fri Aug 3 08:56:25 EEST 2001 root@h33.erkki.ton.tut.fi:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/H33 i386

>Description:
	In the patch below I try to correct two minor errors I faced.

>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:

--- /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build/chapter.sgml.orig	Sat Aug 18 22:47:06 2001
+++ /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build/chapter.sgml	Sat Aug 18 22:47:13 2001
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@
     </itemizedlist>
 
     <para><application>Make</application> syntax is quickly revised as
-      the we explore these types.</para>
+      then we explore these types.</para>
 
     <sect2 id="sub-make">
       <title>Subdirectory Makefiles</title>
--- /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/the-website/chapter.sgml.orig	Sat Aug 18 22:43:17 2001
+++ /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/the-website/chapter.sgml	Sat Aug 18 22:43:27 2001
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
 	  space.</para>
 	
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mkdir /var/tmp/webbuild</userinput>
-&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /var/tmp/webuild</userinput></screen>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /var/tmp/webbuild</userinput></screen>
       </step>
 
       <step>
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
>Unformatted:

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