Date: Sun, 20 Oct 2002 15:23:00 -0400 (EDT) From: Chris Pepper <pepper@rockefeller.edu> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Cc: Alexandre Peixoto <alexandref@tcoip.com.br> Subject: docs/44312: Typos in /usr/src/share/examples/ipfw/change_rules.sh Message-ID: <20021020192300.C2425AA8B@www.reppep.com>
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>Number: 44312
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: Typos in /usr/src/share/examples/ipfw/change_rules.sh
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Sun Oct 20 12:30:01 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Chris Pepper
>Release: FreeBSD 4.7-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD www.reppep.com 4.7-STABLE FreeBSD 4.7-STABLE #4: Sun Oct 20 01:54:39 EDT 2002 root@www.reppep.com:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386
>Description:
Comments in /usr/src/share/examples/ipfw/change_rules.sh have various typos.
>How-To-Repeat:
more /usr/src/share/examples/ipfw/change_rules.sh
>Fix:
Apply this patch.
--- change_rules.sh.patch begins here ---
--- /usr/src/share/examples/ipfw/change_rules.sh Tue Oct 9 09:20:25 2001
+++ change_rules.sh.fixed Sun Oct 20 15:20:45 2002
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
#
# Invoke this script to edit ${firewall_script}. It will call ${EDITOR},
# or vi(1) if the environment variable is not set, for you to edit
-# ${firewall_script}, asks for confirmation and then run
+# ${firewall_script}, ask for confirmation, and then run
# ${firewall_script}. You can then examine the output of ipfw list and
# confirm whether you want the new version or not.
#
@@ -39,14 +39,14 @@
# flush is present in it).
#
# If the new rules are confirmed, they'll replace ${firewall_script} and
-# the previous ones will be copied to ${firewall_script}.{date}. A mail
-# will also be sent to root with the unified diffs of the rule change.
+# the previous ones will be copied to ${firewall_script}.{date}. Mail
+# will also be sent to root with a unified diff of the rule change.
#
-# Non-approved rules are kept in ${firewall_script}.new, and you are
+# Unapproved rules are kept in ${firewall_script}.new, and you are
# offered the option of changing them instead of the present rules when
# you call this script.
#
-# It is suggested improving this script by using some version control
+# This script could be improved by using version control
# software.
if [ -r /etc/defaults/rc.conf ]; then
@@ -121,8 +121,8 @@
cat <<!
The rules will be changed now. If the message 'Type y to keep the new
-rules' do not appear on the screen or the y key is not pressed in 30
-seconds, the former rules will be restored.
+rules' does not appear on the screen or the y key is not pressed in 30
+seconds, the current rules will be restored.
The TCP/IP connections might be broken during the change. If so, restore
the ssh/telnet connection being used.
!
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@
cp ${edit_file} ${edit_file}.$DATE
mv ${edit_file}.new ${edit_file}
cat <<!
-The new rules are now default. The previous rules have been preserved in
+The new rules are now installed. The previous rules have been preserved in
the file ${edit_file}.$DATE
!
diff -F "^# .*[A-Za-z]" -u ${edit_file}.$DATE ${edit_file} \
--- change_rules.sh.patch ends here ---
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