Date: Fri, 16 May 2003 12:39:02 -0700 From: Hiten Pandya <hmp@FreeBSD.ORG> To: "Bruce A. Mah" <bmah@freebsd.org> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/39214: No my(4) man page Message-ID: <20030516193902.GA32275@perrin.int.nxad.com> In-Reply-To: <20030516175320.GA91137@intruder.bmah.org> References: <200305161127.h4GBR0QJ013946@freefall.freebsd.org> <20030516114541.26131d4f.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> <20030516175320.GA91137@intruder.bmah.org>
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--+HP7ph2BbKc20aGI Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Fri, May 16, 2003 at 10:53:20AM -0700, Bruce A. Mah wrote: [Tom wrote:] > > Need more review? Note, mii(4) does not exist, its miibus(4), which > > I wrote and added to the tree a couple of months ago. >=20 > I'll jump in with a few nitpicks. :-p >=20 > The correspondence between "DEC Tulip NIC chipset" and the dc(4) > driver in the cross-references is not clear. >=20 > The supported models are not sentences, and therefore should not end > with full-stops. >=20 > In the HISTORY section, you should say that the my driver *first* > appeared in FreeBSD 4.6. >=20 > The AUTHORS section could probably be better worded as "The my driver > was written by Myson Technologies." If you (hmp) want to give > yourself credit for the manpage, that's acceptable here. >=20 > I'd also try to turn the BUGS section into a complete sentence. >=20 > Bruce. >=20 > PS. Yes, I always sign my name in email as though it were a sentence. > So sue me. :-) Thanks guys! I have updated the manual page accordingly. I was thinking about the NetBSD mii(4) for a second there, but now I am back to the real world. 8-) Once I get a go ahead from re@ and my mentor (des), I will commit it. I have already got approval from Julian, who imported the driver in the first place. Cheers! -- Hiten (hmp@FreeBSD.ORG) --+HP7ph2BbKc20aGI Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- iD8DBQE+xT5VVBcFDV2wzvIRAkfpAKCFUL4JTfbYgSzXSqAOeQQ6N5TsfQCgjVkk xp0Gg8YCs0pIFzwb2LXJapY= =bO+r -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --+HP7ph2BbKc20aGI--
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