From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Feb 14 19:20:40 2011 Return-Path: Delivered-To: doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 88976106566B; Mon, 14 Feb 2011 19:20:40 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from jhelfman@experts-exchange.com) Received: from mail.experts-exchange.com (mail.experts-exchange.com [72.29.183.251]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 651458FC1A; Mon, 14 Feb 2011 19:20:40 +0000 (UTC) Received: from mail.experts-exchange.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mail.experts-exchange.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6477C6EE2C8; Mon, 14 Feb 2011 11:03:11 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=e-e.com; h= user-agent:in-reply-to:content-disposition:content-type :content-type:mime-version:references:message-id:subject:subject :from:from:date:date:received:received:received; s=ee; t= 1297710191; x=1299524591; bh=6Q8O/JV1w4noZr2n4tzhgWqrWApwJwTnQ1n nJZbpKS4=; b=Rvv+vBAVZkfN2mFVmvTU6DLuaGIuP8N7BhKjUPNtCSiJl7VAvis qvjA3pymSMwlCUBDoazkK7KOOnEDWRhFQZEWl0X/bVaHkoihLBW+YgyTr1EQ/fGj veJpfejvLLJGnbW4gbHfER/6Gp6kbL6c6vdnxGz7I8DIL4cTkvWYJ4J0= X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at experts-exchange.com Received: from mail.experts-exchange.com ([127.0.0.1]) by mail.experts-exchange.com (mail.experts-exchange.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 5wm6I1vVC+00; Mon, 14 Feb 2011 11:03:11 -0800 (PST) Received: from experts-exchange.com (unknown [192.168.103.122]) by mail.experts-exchange.com (Postfix) with SMTP id 1042A6EE2C5; Mon, 14 Feb 2011 11:03:11 -0800 (PST) Received: (nullmailer pid 60573 invoked by uid 1001); Mon, 14 Feb 2011 18:59:52 -0000 Date: Mon, 14 Feb 2011 10:59:52 -0800 From: Jason Helfman To: Sahil Tandon Message-ID: <20110214185951.GG14020@eggman.experts-exchange.com> References: <20110214020947.211821711F@spartan.hamla.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii; format=flowed Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20110214020947.211821711F@spartan.hamla.org> X-Operating-System: FreeBSD 8.1-RELEASE X-Living-The-Dream: I love the SLO Life! User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.21 (2010-09-15) Cc: doc@FreeBSD.org, bug-followup@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/154766: [PATCH] Fix typos in freebsd-update-server article X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 14 Feb 2011 19:20:40 -0000 Adding a grammatical fix to this, as well. I am okay with this fix. Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/jhelfman/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.1 diff -u -r1.1 article.sgml --- en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml 13 Feb 2011 17:53:26 -0000 1.1 +++ en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml 14 Feb 2011 18:53:16 -0000 @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ url="&url.base;/cgi/cvsweb.cgi/projects/freebsd-update-server/">freebsd-update-server software is written by &a.cperciva;, current Security Officer of &os;. For users that think it is convenient to update their systems - against an official update server, building an own &fbus.ap; may + against an official update server, building their own &fbus.ap; may help to extend its functionality by supporting manually-tweaked &os; releases or by providing a local mirror that will allow faster updates for a number of machines. @@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ It is sourced during all build operations. Here is the default build.conf, which should - be modified to suite your own environment. + be modified to suit your own environment. @@ -789,7 +789,7 @@ Adding flags to buildworld and obj targets in the - scripts/build.subr script, may speed up + scripts/build.subr script may speed up processing depending on the hardware used, however it is not necessary. Using these flags in other targets is not recommended, as it may cause the build to become unreliable. -- Jason Helfman System Administrator experts-exchange.com http://www.experts-exchange.com/M_4830110.html E4AD 7CF1 1396 27F6 79DD 4342 5E92 AD66 8C8C FBA5