From owner-freebsd-ports-bugs@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Jul 17 12:50:02 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-ports-bugs@smarthost.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [8.8.178.115]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BA2B22D7 for ; Wed, 17 Jul 2013 12:50:02 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206c::16:87]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9B313DF5 for ; Wed, 17 Jul 2013 12:50:02 +0000 (UTC) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.7) with ESMTP id r6HCo27M047749 for ; Wed, 17 Jul 2013 12:50:02 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.7/Submit) id r6HCo2xs047748; Wed, 17 Jul 2013 12:50:02 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Wed, 17 Jul 2013 12:50:02 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <201307171250.r6HCo2xs047748@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-ports-bugs@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, "N.J. Mann" Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [8.8.178.115]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 06C5927A for ; Wed, 17 Jul 2013 12:44:18 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from njm@njm.me.uk) Received: from smtp004.apm-internet.net (smtp004.apm-internet.net [85.119.248.54]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7D762DC6 for ; Wed, 17 Jul 2013 12:44:17 +0000 (UTC) Received: (qmail 14776 invoked from network); 17 Jul 2013 12:44:09 -0000 Received: from unknown (HELO meld.njm.me.uk) (86.159.26.8) by smtp004.apm-internet.net with SMTP; 17 Jul 2013 12:44:09 -0000 Received: from titania.njm.me.uk (titania.njm.me.uk [192.168.144.130]) by meld.njm.me.uk (8.14.7/8.14.7) with ESMTP id r6HCi9Hr001699 for ; Wed, 17 Jul 2013 13:44:09 +0100 (BST) (envelope-from njm@meld.njm.me.uk) Received: from titania.njm.me.uk (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by titania.njm.me.uk (8.14.7/8.14.7) with ESMTP id r6HCi8JF074989 for ; Wed, 17 Jul 2013 13:44:08 +0100 (BST) (envelope-from njm@titania.njm.me.uk) Received: (from njm@localhost) by titania.njm.me.uk (8.14.7/8.14.7/Submit) id r6HCi8WK074988; Wed, 17 Jul 2013 13:44:08 +0100 (BST) (envelope-from njm) Message-Id: <201307171244.r6HCi8WK074988@titania.njm.me.uk> Date: Wed, 17 Jul 2013 13:44:08 +0100 (BST) From: "N.J. Mann" To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.114 Subject: ports/180607: [sysutils/zfsnap] grammar error(s) in pkg-descr X-BeenThere: freebsd-ports-bugs@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list Reply-To: "N.J. Mann" List-Id: Ports bug reports List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 17 Jul 2013 12:50:02 -0000 >Number: 180607 >Category: ports >Synopsis: [sysutils/zfsnap] grammar error(s) in pkg-descr >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-ports-bugs >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Wed Jul 17 12:50:00 UTC 2013 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: N.J. Mann >Release: FreeBSD 8.4-STABLE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD titania.njm.me.uk 8.4-STABLE FreeBSD 8.4-STABLE #43 r253256M: Fri Jul 12 11:40:39 BST 2013 njm@titania.njm.me.uk:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/titania i386 FreeBSD ports r323143 >Description: The pkg-descr file for the port sysutils/zfsnap contains grammar errors. A percentage sign is a suffix not, as here, a prefix - see attached patch. Also, the grammar of the first sentence is poor. Perhaps something like the following could be used instead: zfSnap is a simple sh script for creating ZFS snapshots. When called from cron rolling snapshots can be created and deleted automatically. >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: --- pkg-descr.diff begins here --- Index: pkg-descr =================================================================== --- pkg-descr (revision 323143) +++ pkg-descr (working copy) @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ zfSnap is simple sh script to make rolling zfs snapshots with cron. Main -advantage of zfSnap is that it's written in %100 pure /bin/sh, doesn't +advantage of zfSnap is that it's written in 100% pure /bin/sh, doesn't require any additional software to run, and is simple to use. zfSnap keeps all information about snapshot in snapshot name. zfs snapshot --- pkg-descr.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: