From owner-svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Sat Feb 27 15:28:38 2016 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6B201AB5E9F; Sat, 27 Feb 2016 15:28:38 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 377161E27; Sat, 27 Feb 2016 15:28:38 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.37]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id u1RFSb9s035185; Sat, 27 Feb 2016 15:28:37 GMT (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from wblock@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id u1RFSbTa035184; Sat, 27 Feb 2016 15:28:37 GMT (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201602271528.u1RFSbTa035184@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: wblock set sender to wblock@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Warren Block Date: Sat, 27 Feb 2016 15:28:37 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r48279 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.20 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 27 Feb 2016 15:28:38 -0000 Author: wblock Date: Sat Feb 27 15:28:36 2016 New Revision: 48279 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48279 Log: Fix one instance of "document(s)" (please don't ever, ever, ever use that) and change passive/unsure "should be" to "are". Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build/chapter.xml Sat Feb 27 14:12:52 2016 (r48278) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build/chapter.xml Sat Feb 27 15:28:36 2016 (r48279) @@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ Documentation Makefiles describe the - document(s) that should be produced from this + documents that are produced from this directory.