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From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Sun, 1 Aug 2004 05:48:15 +0000 (UTC)
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murray      2004-08-01 05:48:15 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface preface.sgml 
  Log:
  * Add a section about improvements that have been made since the 2nd
    Printed Edition.
  
  * Update the section about improvements between the first and second
    editions to refer to the second edition in the past tense.
  
  Obtained from:  FreeBSD Mall, Inc. 3rd Edition FreeBSD Handbook
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.23      +92 -3     doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml