Date: Tue, 31 Jan 2012 13:58:44 -0700 (MST) From: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com> To: Daniel Gerzo <danger@freebsd.org> Cc: doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: New Handbook Section for Review - graid3 Message-ID: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1201311344400.97077@wonkity.com> In-Reply-To: <20120131104953.GA55314@freefall.freebsd.org> References: <20120131104953.GA55314@freefall.freebsd.org>
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This message is in MIME format. The first part should be readable text, while the remaining parts are likely unreadable without MIME-aware tools. --SUOF0GtieIMvvwua Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; CHARSET=US-ASCII; format=flowed Content-ID: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1201311344402.97077@wonkity.com> Content-Disposition: INLINE On Tue, 31 Jan 2012, Daniel Gerzo wrote: > A new Handbook section covering graid3 is now available for review; > the patch is attached. > > The text is based on PR 164228. A built version is available at > http://people.freebsd.org/~danger/geom-raid3.html. > > Comments are welcome. Patch with suggested changes attached. This is a full diff, not a diff to your diff. Some general things I'm not sure about, but will suggest: Personally, I prefer add this setting to configfile <programlisting>'blahblah'</programlisting> to Run this command <screen>'echo blahblah >> configfile'</screen> I did not change those, though. Various wording changes. The sentence explaining total capacity could still be better, I think. Paragraphs were intentionally not rewrapped, but should be. The paragraph starting "To retain this configuration across reboots" was unclear. I hope it still means what it did. A couple of blank lines had whitespace. Title capitalization was changed a bit. igor (http://www.wonkity.com/~wblock/igor/) can proofread those. --SUOF0GtieIMvvwua Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII; name=geom-wb.diff Content-Transfer-Encoding: BASE64 Content-ID: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1201311358440.97077@wonkity.com> Content-Description: Content-Disposition: attachment; filename=geom-wb.diff SW5kZXg6IGNoYXB0ZXIuc2dtbA0KPT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09 PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PQ0K UkNTIGZpbGU6IC9ob21lL2RjdnMvZG9jL2VuX1VTLklTTzg4NTktMS9ib29r cy9oYW5kYm9vay9nZW9tL2NoYXB0ZXIuc2dtbCx2DQpyZXRyaWV2aW5nIHJl dmlzaW9uIDEuNTENCmRpZmYgLXUgLXIxLjUxIGNoYXB0ZXIuc2dtbA0KLS0t IGNoYXB0ZXIuc2dtbAkyMSBOb3YgMjAxMSAxODoxMToyNSAtMDAwMAkxLjUx DQorKysgY2hhcHRlci5zZ21sCTMxIEphbiAyMDEyIDIwOjQ0OjE1IC0wMDAw DQpAQCAtNDM2LDYgKzQzNiwxNjIgQEANCiAgICAgPC9zZWN0Mj4NCiAgIDwv c2VjdDE+DQogDQorICA8c2VjdDEgaWQ9IkdFT00tcmFpZDMiPg0KKyAgICA8 c2VjdDFpbmZvPg0KKyAgICAgIDxhdXRob3Jncm91cD4NCisJPGF1dGhvcj4N 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