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V po, 03. 11. 2003 v 21:35, Maksim Yevmenkin p=ED=B9e:

> Dear Hackers,
>=20
> i'm trying to atack few open Bluetooth-related PR's. PR docs/52514
> has Bluetooth chapter for handbook. i've modified it a bit and would
> like to commit it (see attached).=20
>=20
> if anyone from doc-committers would like to work with me on this, i'd
> really appreciate this.=20

Hi Maksim,

I read it and I have a suggestion.

SDP section should be updated to document sdpcontrol usage, which is now
in base, instead of sdptool (ports/ in your snapshot). Do we have sdpd
in base?

Otherwise it looks good, I like a short explanation paragraphs at the
beginning of every section.

--=20
Pav Lucistnik <pav@oook.cz>
What do we know about love? Love is like a pear. Pear is sweet and have
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  -- Marigold: 50 Years Of Poetry

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