From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Oct 23 11:56:44 2006 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E52E216A47C; Mon, 23 Oct 2006 11:56:44 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from yar@comp.chem.msu.su) Received: from comp.chem.msu.su (comp.chem.msu.su [158.250.32.97]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8AF4243D73; Mon, 23 Oct 2006 11:56:34 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from yar@comp.chem.msu.su) Received: from comp.chem.msu.su (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by comp.chem.msu.su (8.13.4/8.13.3) with ESMTP id k9NBuUJx088829; Mon, 23 Oct 2006 15:56:30 +0400 (MSD) (envelope-from yar@comp.chem.msu.su) Received: (from yar@localhost) by comp.chem.msu.su (8.13.4/8.13.3/Submit) id k9NBuUSu088827; Mon, 23 Oct 2006 15:56:30 +0400 (MSD) (envelope-from yar) Date: Mon, 23 Oct 2006 15:56:29 +0400 From: Yar Tikhiy To: Giorgos Keramidas Message-ID: <20061023115629.GB87535@comp.chem.msu.su> References: <20061015173531.GB31717@comp.chem.msu.su> <20061018225653.GA1332@gothmog.pc> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20061018225653.GA1332@gothmog.pc> User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.9i Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: New article X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 23 Oct 2006 11:56:45 -0000 On Thu, Oct 19, 2006 at 01:56:53AM +0300, Giorgos Keramidas wrote: > On 2006-10-15 21:35, Yar Tikhiy wrote: > > Hi folks, > > > > I wrote an article on our rc.d subsystem. Its draft in sgml and > > html is available at http://people.freebsd.org/~yar/rcng/ . It has > > been reviewed on freebsd-rc. Now I'd like to add it to our article > > collection. I see that I should commit the article itself, then > > update www/docs/books.sgml. What else? > > > > P.S. Please feel free to review my article WRT its markup. Thanks! > > Hi Yar, > > First of all, *THANKS*! > > This is a great article, and I really enjoyed reading it. One of my > latest commits to doc/ was, in fact, inspired by this article: I'm much pleased to hear that my humble work was useful to you! > Having said that, as I was going through the article, I noticed a few > places where I would probably word things in a slightly different way. > I am not sure if all my changes are ok, but the attached patch shows all > the changes I have made locally. Thank you for the patch! Although I didn't apply all its parts verbatim, the patch showed me quite a number of rough corners still in my article. I did my best to polish them. The revised version is ready at http://people.freebsd.org/~yar/rcng/ . > This is still a work-in-progress, as I am going a second time through > the article, looking for things which I would write in a different way, > or for things which seem cool to add. I'm not done, yet, but here is a > first patch version, so we can work in parallel ;) Your help is much appreciated! > If you like any of the changes, feel free to import them in your own > copy of the article. Please, also let em know if you need help while > committing this to doc/. I can commit to doc by myself, and I'd like to, but would you mind telling me what I should do apart from committing the article itself, connecting it to the build via ../Makefile, and adding a reference to the Books & Articles Online webpage? By the way, what short title would you suggest for the article? Does "rc-scripting" look good? -- Yar