From owner-cvs-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Mar 17 14:09:45 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E2B251065673 for ; Sat, 17 Mar 2012 14:09:45 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from lists@eitanadler.com) Received: from mail-wi0-f178.google.com (mail-wi0-f178.google.com [209.85.212.178]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 39D508FC1A for ; Sat, 17 Mar 2012 14:09:44 +0000 (UTC) Received: by wibhq7 with SMTP id hq7so1624863wib.13 for ; Sat, 17 Mar 2012 07:09:44 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=eitanadler.com; s=0xdeadbeef; h=mime-version:sender:from:date:x-google-sender-auth:message-id :subject:to:cc:content-type:content-transfer-encoding; bh=JB7yPvlmljOBQ0dyDvhN0FZVmWnxWlyWF1NHO0/7+Sk=; b=nvR/r5vGVNhOlTu0ze2EJ/qcIXJxePlwnenwPyAOOdQ6E5HTVuRWve/Crlm1JwDZKx g9qCoWn3Wir/pfOoqzgYGpYK6ctaHqNNtnboDly6i/O3M9bF982IBH4CsbPUt5m8bpGB mePre1nfauVpeu6oIlAG6Df1ttv+LKE9zFUbc= X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=google.com; s=20120113; h=mime-version:sender:from:date:x-google-sender-auth:message-id :subject:to:cc:content-type:content-transfer-encoding :x-gm-message-state; bh=JB7yPvlmljOBQ0dyDvhN0FZVmWnxWlyWF1NHO0/7+Sk=; b=ZuOWgBKqXFGoYcBF55z2+OAxgxqghPKi4naCyR7sxi9WxTveJovPuo2WrZYnj3Mo/e i1dO9ppvTiQIrUtmSId2rjVc/H1my3Fvr9XEM87TJprH5i5PkdLUtVNwkEPMZR1I4ydG yCl82D4T5MvGV3FdvOBAfoHrrUqnhVKHy3g4oAFhQnie4YvHeptzMMt0550ew8X50VWe 4LifbdvAUXgyMBHOPuPMA/fbjHHcojRInY8w0ArIwHXlVYAxthsoqaGUJrYL95t3qQLX 2jRxSkXif4QPtEUs8r9kYqXXQz2K1Ih/FsGNjZvSg+GEUr5pBGEw4ukncZbwAxyJFIL8 Cm+A== Received: by 10.180.85.70 with SMTP id f6mr6600724wiz.5.1331993384036; Sat, 17 Mar 2012 07:09:44 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Sender: lists@eitanadler.com Received: by 10.223.78.204 with HTTP; Sat, 17 Mar 2012 07:09:13 -0700 (PDT) From: Eitan Adler Date: Sat, 17 Mar 2012 10:09:13 -0400 X-Google-Sender-Auth: Kjjd0-X-WcEFMQnInEGtPSEinKM Message-ID: To: Gavin Atkinson Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Gm-Message-State: ALoCoQnOxh5cKkLRlvWyB3w74+SKgwhuJvEb/PUi6MrFVh9+vuGHvz3/fivvAxzavulSWpZLBZ6I Cc: doc-committers@freebsd.org, cvs-doc@freebsd.org, cvs-all@freebsd.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/mac chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/pccard chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/dev-model book.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking chapter.sgml doc X-BeenThere: cvs-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the doc and www trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 17 Mar 2012 14:09:46 -0000 On Sat, Mar 17, 2012 at 8:09 AM, Gavin Atkinson wrote: >> =C2=A0 1.13 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0+1 -1 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0doc/en_US.ISO8= 859-1/books/arch-handbook/pccard/chapter.sgml > > This was an intentional use of "that that", and your change alters the > meaning of the sentence. I dislike the construction 'that that'. Perhaps the wording should be "NULL entries mean that the corresponding part of entry..."? Can you propose different text that works better? --=20 Eitan Adler Source & Ports committer X11, Bugbusting teams