Date: Sun, 30 Dec 2012 20:55:11 GMT From: deeptech71 <deeptech71@gmail.com> To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: www/174840: the grammar of 9.1-RELEASE announcements Message-ID: <201212302055.qBUKtBC0056992@red.freebsd.org> Resent-Message-ID: <201212302100.qBUL005t018509@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 174840 >Category: www >Synopsis: the grammar of 9.1-RELEASE announcements >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-www >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun Dec 30 21:00:00 UTC 2012 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: deeptech71 >Release: >Organization: >Environment: >Description: Certain web pages are in need of a review by an expert on English grammar. On http://www.freebsd.org/releases/9.1R/announce.html, "until it's End-of-Life (EoL) date of" should instead be "until its End-of-Life (EoL) date of". On http://www.freebsd.org/releases/9.1R/relnotes.html and http://www.freebsd.org/releases/9.1R/relnotes-detailed.html, "more then 4" should instead be "more than 4"; "A bug in ae(4) driver" should instead be "A bug in the ae(4) driver"; in "It now works", "It" should be replaced with "bge(4)" or whatever "It" was supposed to refer to ("It" currently refers to "a bug which [...]"); "cxgbe(4) and cxgb(4) driver" should instead be "cxgbe(4) and cxgb(4) drivers"; "multiple FIB" should instead be "multiple FIBs"; "clang" should instead be "Clang"; and may I be relieved from having to describe hundreds of other errors here -- review the release announcements yourself. >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted:
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