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From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook Makefile
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On Mon, 29 Sep 2008 20:42:15 +0800
Ganbold <ganbold@micom.mng.net> wrote:

> Tom Rhodes wrote:
> > On Sun, 28 Sep 2008 16:44:57 +0300
> > Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org> wrote:
> >
> >   
> >> On Sun, 28 Sep 2008 12:54:12 +0000 (UTC), Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> wrote:
> >>     
> >>> trhodes     2008-09-28 12:54:12 UTC
> >>>
> >>>   FreeBSD doc repository
> >>>
> >>>   Modified files:
> >>>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook Makefile book.sgml chapters.ent
> >>>   Log:
> >>>   Add the DTrace, file systems, and Updating chapters to the build.  They
> >>>   need a bit more fleshing out, but there is no reason why they should
> >>>   remain local patches anymore.
> >>>
> >>>   Reviewed by:    remko, pgj, manolis, keramida
> >>>       
> >> Thanks!  These are nice chapters, and now we have something cool to
> >> point users to when they ask about DTrace and ZFS :)
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >
> > Can't wait to point people at work toward this.  :)
> >
> > Thanks for you help with this!
> >
> >   
> Another small thing, in filesystems chapter:
> ...
> There are many more options for the Z file system, reading the zfs(1) 
> and zpool(1) manual pages
> ...
> 
> I guess it should be s/reading/read.
> Maybe I'm wrong here.

Thanks!  You're right, I've just made a commit to fix these
issues.  If you find anything else, please let me know!

-- 
Tom Rhodes