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On Tue, 2009-08-11 at 09:16 +0200, Remko Lodder wrote:
> On Tue, August 11, 2009 9:10 am, Remko Lodder wrote:
> > remko       2009-08-11 07:10:14 UTC
> >
> >   FreeBSD doc repository
> >
> >   Modified files:
> >     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems chapter.sgml
> >   Log:
> >   Tidy up the ZFS section a bit, adjust the RAID-Z example from two to
> > three
> >   drives and add a warning that the suggested configuration is between
> > three
> >   to nine disks.
> >
> >   PR:             135983
> >
> >   Revision  Changes    Path
> >   1.6       +27 -14
> > doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.sgml
> >
> 
> I am doubting a bit whether the <warning> should be a <footnote> instead.
> If people have suggestions, please let me know so that we can make it best
> as possible ;)

http://people.freebsd.org/~gavin/PRs/135983.2.diff

That's basically a combination of both of our patches.  It fixes some
whitespace issues, rewords a little bit, fixes a capitalisation bug and
changes more numbers to words.

Thanks,

Gavin