From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Dec 9 14:38:33 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3E682106566C for ; Thu, 9 Dec 2010 14:38:33 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from glen.j.barber@gmail.com) Received: from mail-qy0-f170.google.com (mail-qy0-f170.google.com [209.85.216.170]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DD51D8FC08 for ; Thu, 9 Dec 2010 14:38:32 +0000 (UTC) Received: by qyk10 with SMTP id 10so7623270qyk.15 for ; Thu, 09 Dec 2010 06:38:32 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from :user-agent:mime-version:to:subject:references:in-reply-to :x-enigmail-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding; bh=pSoyYZ94cGg1I5ao+ALmDQwFtKkC+PdiCXGCx6c4XpA=; b=SQwZGS8IWjPEqo8dmMcoEoKQOMqPtC7qxcGVQ8pyvMmO/DvxTaEDL54Oyn1S6r9jfr ZUauwBUQOO8f2tOEKMsfTE6kXe7jFmR9GiNRYUKfjc4rCdnmUNtc2Ic4hLqvucmCkiD+ dmnV2c5Nkv+OpvsK06ELBTxArnVLlPJZwBELM= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=message-id:date:from:user-agent:mime-version:to:subject:references :in-reply-to:x-enigmail-version:content-type :content-transfer-encoding; b=Jkvf9uZfEYsl9GWSptJ5JET6Ul8WCmVXRjOJ7mzrsFpDjcNr8uEkKM4bcwXoLAYxbH I9FaVZhNdFQHvhob/vl/y5BS/jk0FiXGhG6tQrTXjVQB/zTUgPtiWNjWY0P5/RjKQvZ5 4Ct5WUFAtmkD9R6S8iUmaRdaEAUCzdfXWji2Q= Received: by 10.224.67.140 with SMTP id r12mr6721347qai.37.1291903691500; Thu, 09 Dec 2010 06:08:11 -0800 (PST) Received: from schism.local (173-161-130-225-Philadelphia.hfc.comcastbusiness.net [173.161.130.225]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id y17sm1192459qci.33.2010.12.09.06.08.08 (version=SSLv3 cipher=RC4-MD5); Thu, 09 Dec 2010 06:08:09 -0800 (PST) Message-ID: <4D00E2C8.8020206@gmail.com> Date: Thu, 09 Dec 2010 09:08:08 -0500 From: Glen Barber User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Macintosh; U; Intel Mac OS X 10.6; en-US; rv:1.9.2.12) Gecko/20101027 Thunderbird/3.1.6 MIME-Version: 1.0 To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org References: <20101209.223154.193764232.ryusuke@jp.FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <20101209.223154.193764232.ryusuke@jp.FreeBSD.org> X-Enigmail-Version: 1.1.1 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Subject: Re: newbies page (ppp) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 09 Dec 2010 14:38:33 -0000 Hi Ryusuke, On 12/9/10 8:31 AM, Ryusuke SUZUKI wrote: > Hello, > > "Resorces for Newvies" page, > http://www.freebsd.org/projects/newbies.html > >> The first thing many people need to set up is ppp, and there is a lot of documentation >> to help. You might start with at least those parts of the Handbook that are relevant >> to your needs, and explore the ppp page for links to the other valuable information >> and the latest updates. > > "The first thing many people need to set up is ppp,..." > > Do you agree? > > I suspect that many people need not set up ppp these days. > > How about the following patch? > > diff -u -r1.58 newbies.sgml > --- newbies.sgml 9 Aug 2009 12:58:45 -0000 1.58 > +++ newbies.sgml 9 Dec 2010 13:23:06 -0000 > @@ -70,9 +70,8 @@ > beginners. You do not have to know much about anything to enjoy > this one.

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  • The first thing many people need to set up is ppp, and there is > - a lot of documentation to help. You might start with at least those > - parts of the > +

  • There is a lot of documentation to help for setting up ppp. > + You might start with at least those parts of the I think with this rewording, "at least" can be removed. Best regards, -- Glen Barber