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Subject: svn commit: r43886 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports
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Author: jgh
Date: Wed Feb 12 19:38:42 2014
New Revision: 43886
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43886

Log:
  - consolidate instructions for pkg installation of subversion
  - while here, place FQDN in <replaceable> tags
  
  Submitted by:	lamproschaidas@aol.com (doc@ mailing list)
  Approved by:	wblock (mentor)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml	Wed Feb 12 19:08:16 2014	(r43885)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml	Wed Feb 12 19:38:42 2014	(r43886)
@@ -952,17 +952,13 @@ Deinstalling ca_root_nss-3.15.1_1... don
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/ports/devel/subversion</userinput>
 &prompt.root; <userinput>make install clean</userinput></screen>
 
-	<para>If the ports tree is not available,
-	  <application>Subversion</application> can be installed as
-	  a package:</para>
+	<para>If the ports tree is not available, or
+	  <application>pkgng</application> is being used to manage
+	  packages, <application>Subversion</application> can be
+	  installed as a package:</para>
 
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg install subversion</userinput></screen>
 
-	<para>If <application>pkgng</application> is being used to
-	  manage packages, <application>Subversion</application> can
-	  be installed with it instead:</para>
-
-	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg install subversion</userinput></screen>
       </step>
 
       <step>
@@ -973,7 +969,7 @@ Deinstalling ca_root_nss-3.15.1_1... don
 	    xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/svn-mirrors.html">Subversion
 	    mirror</link> close to your geographic location:</para>
 
-	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>svn checkout https://svn0.us-east.FreeBSD.org/ports/head /usr/ports</userinput></screen>
+	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>svn checkout https://<replaceable>svn0.us-east.FreeBSD.org</replaceable>/ports/head /usr/ports</userinput></screen>
       </step>
 
       <step>