From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon May 5 18:10:05 2008 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 10383106567A for ; Mon, 5 May 2008 18:10:05 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::28]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DDA798FC23 for ; Mon, 5 May 2008 18:10:04 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.2/8.14.2) with ESMTP id m45IA4hu006045 for ; Mon, 5 May 2008 18:10:04 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.2/8.14.1/Submit) id m45IA4Vi006044; Mon, 5 May 2008 18:10:04 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Mon, 5 May 2008 18:10:04 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200805051810.m45IA4Vi006044@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Gabor PALI Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5E6B61065676 for ; Mon, 5 May 2008 18:05:40 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from pali.gabor@googlemail.com) Received: from nf-out-0910.google.com (nf-out-0910.google.com [64.233.182.188]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D738C8FC2F for ; Mon, 5 May 2008 18:05:39 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from pali.gabor@googlemail.com) Received: by nf-out-0910.google.com with SMTP id h3so1323716nfh.33 for ; Mon, 05 May 2008 11:05:38 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.210.37.16 with SMTP id k16mr5897089ebk.194.1210010738212; Mon, 05 May 2008 11:05:38 -0700 (PDT) Received: from pgj@FreeBSD.org ( [80.98.116.90]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id c22sm11752643ika.1.2008.05.05.11.05.36 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=OTHER); Mon, 05 May 2008 11:05:37 -0700 (PDT) Received: by pgj@FreeBSD.org (sSMTP sendmail emulation); Mon, 5 May 2008 20:05:34 +0200 Message-Id: <481f4c71.1636440a.1bf6.2ea4@mx.google.com> Date: Mon, 5 May 2008 20:05:34 +0200 From: "Gabor PALI" Sender: =?UTF-8?B?UMOBTEkgR8OhYm9yIErDoW5vcw==?= To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Cc: Subject: docs/123423: [patch] Fix Misused Tags in Handbook Chapter 24 X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: Gabor PALI List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 05 May 2008 18:10:05 -0000 >Number: 123423 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [patch] Fix Misused Tags in Handbook Chapter 24 >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Mon May 05 18:10:04 UTC 2008 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Gabor PALI >Release: FreeBSD 6.3-STABLE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD disznohal 6.3-STABLE FreeBSD 6.3-STABLE #4: Fri Apr 4 23:29:43 CEST 2008 dezzy@disznohal:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC_ i386 >Description: I found some misused tags in the FreeBSD Handbook Chapter 24 (``Serial Communications''). I think they should be replaced with tags, because they are instructing the user to press those keys. I did not find any tags in the other chapters. >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: --- serialcomms.patch.2.diff begins here --- Index: chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.120 diff -u -r1.120 chapter.sgml --- chapter.sgml 28 Dec 2007 11:11:43 -0000 1.120 +++ chapter.sgml 5 May 2008 04:27:47 -0000 @@ -1317,7 +1317,7 @@ login: message at an initial speed and watches the characters that come back in response. If the user sees junk, it is assumed that they know they should press the - Enter key until they see a recognizable + Enter key until they see a recognizable prompt. If the data rates do not match, getty sees anything the user types as junk, tries going to the next speed and gives the login: prompt again. This @@ -1744,7 +1744,7 @@ Try dialing into the system; be sure to use 8 bits, no parity, and 1 stop bit on the remote system. If you do not get a prompt right - away, or get garbage, try pressing Enter + away, or get garbage, try pressing Enter about once per second. If you still do not see a login: prompt after a while, try sending a BREAK. If you are using a high-speed modem to do @@ -2455,7 +2455,7 @@ you may want to do so in order to make sure things are set up correctly. - Hit any key, other than Enter, at the console to + Hit any key, other than Enter, at the console to interrupt the boot process. The boot blocks will then prompt you for further action. You should now see something like: @@ -2466,12 +2466,12 @@ Verify the above message appears on either the serial or internal console or both, according to the options you put in /boot.config. If the message appears in the - correct console, hit Enter to continue the boot + correct console, hit Enter to continue the boot process. If you want the serial console but you do not see the prompt on the serial terminal, something is wrong with your settings. In - the meantime, you enter and hit Enter/Return + the meantime, you enter and hit Enter or Return (if possible) to tell the boot block (and then the boot loader and the kernel) to choose the serial port for the console. Once the system is up, go back and check what went wrong. --- serialcomms.patch.2.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: