From owner-freebsd-doc Wed Mar 4 15:19:37 1998 Return-Path: Received: (from majordom@localhost) by hub.freebsd.org (8.8.8/8.8.8) id PAA17468 for freebsd-doc-outgoing; Wed, 4 Mar 1998 15:19:37 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG) Received: from pluto.plutotech.com (mail.plutotech.com [206.168.67.137]) by hub.freebsd.org (8.8.8/8.8.8) with ESMTP id PAA17448 for ; Wed, 4 Mar 1998 15:19:33 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from kelly@plutotech.com) Received: from plutotech.com (tampopo.plutotech.com [206.168.67.161]) by pluto.plutotech.com (8.8.7/8.8.5) with ESMTP id QAA06801; Wed, 4 Mar 1998 16:19:17 -0700 (MST) Message-ID: <34FDE174.6ACF8428@plutotech.com> Date: Wed, 04 Mar 1998 16:19:16 -0700 From: Sean Kelly Organization: Pluto Technologies X-Mailer: Mozilla 4.04 [en] (X11; I; FreeBSD 3.0-CURRENT i386) MIME-Version: 1.0 To: Greg Lehey CC: FreeBSD Documenters Subject: Re: Graphics in handbook? What do you think? References: <19980227114815.57531@freebie.lemis.com> <34F6E001.D09568D8@plutotech.com> <19980228132125.15343@freebie.lemis.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk X-Loop: FreeBSD.org > Tell me what you think now. I like it. I think I'd find a way to make "Communicator" instead of "windowMenuLite" appear in the menubar. Someone's X resources might be screwed up. One other possible source for confusion might be the term "image". Before the screenshot, the paragraph refers to the floppy boot image; after the shot, there's a remark about what to do if your browser doesn't support images. A discussion of images does come later, but maybe too late? Maybe you want to call the pictures in the browser "icons" instead. A few grammatical nits: * "XF86331 is ... It's strongly recommended to install it." Howabout: "It's strongly recommended that you install it." * "games contains ... Don't exepct any great things from this distribution." Add: "especially now that boggle is gone." :-) Otherwise, it looks great, and it should help cut down on those pesky questions asking "uh, what file do I download?" --Sean To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message