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Author: eadler
Date: Thu Feb 14 14:20:32 2013
New Revision: 40967
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40967

Log:
  Minor wording niggles
  
  Submitted by:	bjk
  Approved by:	bcr (mentor)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/driverbasics/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/driverbasics/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/driverbasics/chapter.xml	Thu Feb 14 14:20:30 2013	(r40966)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/driverbasics/chapter.xml	Thu Feb 14 14:20:32 2013	(r40967)
@@ -139,8 +139,8 @@ DECLARE_MODULE(skeleton, skel_mod, SI_SU
     <sect2>
       <title>Makefile</title>
 
-      <para>FreeBSD provides a makefile include to
-	quickly compile a kernel addition.</para>
+      <para>&os; provides a system makefile to simplify compiling a
+      kernel module.</para>
 
       <programlisting>SRCS=skeleton.c
 KMOD=skeleton
@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ KMOD=skeleton
       the source tree.</para>
 
     <para>This simple example pseudo-device remembers whatever values
-      that are written to it and can then echo them back when
+      are written to it and can then echo them back when
       read.</para>
 
     <example>