From owner-freebsd-doc Mon Apr 1 6:10:28 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.FreeBSD.org [216.136.204.21]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D392E37B42B for ; Mon, 1 Apr 2002 06:10:04 -0800 (PST) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.11.6/8.11.6) id g31EA4E41889; Mon, 1 Apr 2002 06:10:04 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from gnats) Received: from foo31-146.visit.se (foo31-146.visit.se [62.119.31.146]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 26AFF37B416 for ; Mon, 1 Apr 2002 06:02:15 -0800 (PST) Received: (from martin@localhost) by foo31-146.visit.se (8.11.6/8.11.6) id g31E2B001316; Mon, 1 Apr 2002 16:02:11 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from martin) Message-Id: <200204011402.g31E2B001316@foo31-146.visit.se> Date: Mon, 1 Apr 2002 16:02:11 +0200 (CEST) From: Martin Karlsson Reply-To: Martin Karlsson To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Subject: docs/36614: [PATCH] typos in the handbook Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org >Number: 36614 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [PATCH] typos in the handbook >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Mon Apr 01 06:10:04 PST 2002 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Martin Karlsson >Release: FreeBSD 4.5-RELEASE-p2 i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD foo31-146.visit.se 4.5-RELEASE-p2 FreeBSD 4.5-RELEASE-p2 #0: Wed Mar 27 07:31:58 CET 2002 root@foo31-146.visit.se:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/BERTIL i386 >Description: This patch fixes some typos in the handbook. Hopefully. Cheers, -- Martin >How-To-Repeat: Read the handbook. >Fix: Apply the following patch. --- diff.handbook begins here --- diff -ru handbook.orig/backups/chapter.sgml handbook/backups/chapter.sgml --- handbook.orig/backups/chapter.sgml Mon Apr 1 15:02:09 2002 +++ handbook/backups/chapter.sgml Mon Apr 1 15:31:13 2002 @@ -511,7 +511,7 @@ printouts and the backup tapes. You will be so distraught when restoring that the notes may prevent you from destroying your backup tapes (How? In place of tar xvf /dev/rsa0, you - might accidently type tar cvf /dev/rsa0 and + might accidentally type tar cvf /dev/rsa0 and over-write your backup tape). For an added measure of security, make bootable floppies and two diff -ru handbook.orig/config/chapter.sgml handbook/config/chapter.sgml --- handbook.orig/config/chapter.sgml Mon Apr 1 15:02:10 2002 +++ handbook/config/chapter.sgml Mon Apr 1 15:43:21 2002 @@ -975,7 +975,7 @@ during heavy operations, so these operations are quicker than synchronous updates. Additionally the complexity of the implementation is fairly - limited, so the risk of bugs being present is low. A disadvatage + limited, so the risk of bugs being present is low. A disadvantage is that all meta-data are written twice (once into the logging region and once to the proper location) so for normal work, a performance pessimization @@ -1085,7 +1085,7 @@ this number, the kernel is given most of its pre-defined limits. Even though a production machine may not actually have 256 users connected as once, the resources needed may be similar to a - high-scale webserver. + high-scale web server. As of FreeBSD 4.5, setting to 0 in your kernel configuration file will choose @@ -1107,7 +1107,7 @@ needed. If you have a web server which maxes out at 1000 simultaneous connections, and each connection eats a 16K receive and 16K send buffer, you need approximately 32MB worth of - network buffers to cover the webserver. A good rule of thumb is + network buffers to cover the web server. A good rule of thumb is to multiply by 2, so 32MBx2 = 64MB/2K = 32768. diff -ru handbook.orig/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml --- handbook.orig/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml Mon Apr 1 15:02:10 2002 +++ handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml Mon Apr 1 15:31:32 2002 @@ -1389,7 +1389,7 @@ Congratulations. If things went slightly wrong, it is easy to rebuild a particular - piece of the system. For example, if you accidently deleted + piece of the system. For example, if you accidentally deleted /etc/magic as part of the upgrade or merge of /etc, the &man.file.1; command will stop working. In this case, the fix would be to run: diff -ru handbook.orig/disks/chapter.sgml handbook/disks/chapter.sgml --- handbook.orig/disks/chapter.sgml Mon Apr 1 15:02:10 2002 +++ handbook/disks/chapter.sgml Mon Apr 1 15:31:47 2002 @@ -1753,7 +1753,7 @@ printouts and the backup tapes. You will be so distraught when restoring that the notes may prevent you from destroying your backup tapes (How? In place of tar xvf /dev/rsa0, you - might accidently type tar cvf /dev/rsa0 and + might accidentally type tar cvf /dev/rsa0 and over-write your backup tape). For an added measure of security, make bootable floppies and two diff -ru handbook.orig/install/chapter.sgml handbook/install/chapter.sgml --- handbook.orig/install/chapter.sgml Mon Apr 1 15:02:11 2002 +++ handbook/install/chapter.sgml Mon Apr 1 15:05:57 2002 @@ -2805,7 +2805,7 @@ For detailed information on Local Area Networks and configuring FreeBSD as a gateway/router refer to the tutorial - PPP- Pendantic PPP Primer. + PPP- Pedantic PPP Primer. User Confirmation Requested Would you like to configure Ethernet or SLIP/PPP network devices? diff -ru handbook.orig/ports/chapter.sgml handbook/ports/chapter.sgml --- handbook.orig/ports/chapter.sgml Mon Apr 1 15:02:15 2002 +++ handbook/ports/chapter.sgml Mon Apr 1 15:06:41 2002 @@ -534,7 +534,7 @@ Change CHANGE_THIS.FreeBSD.org to a CVSup near you. See CVSupp Mirrors (CVSup Mirrors () for a complete listing of mirror sites. diff -ru handbook.orig/security/chapter.sgml handbook/security/chapter.sgml --- handbook.orig/security/chapter.sgml Mon Apr 1 15:02:10 2002 +++ handbook/security/chapter.sgml Mon Apr 1 15:24:26 2002 @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -