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Date:      Wed, 16 Apr 2014 14:01:56 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Dru Lavigne <dru@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r44576 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/dtrace
Message-ID:  <201404161401.s3GE1uRk050937@svn.freebsd.org>

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Author: dru
Date: Wed Apr 16 14:01:55 2014
New Revision: 44576
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44576

Log:
  Finish editorial review of DTrace chapter.
  Add an explanatory paragraph for probes.
  This chapter still needs a section on userland DTrace.
  
  Sponsored by:	iXsystems

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/dtrace/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/dtrace/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/dtrace/chapter.xml	Wed Apr 16 13:08:13 2014	(r44575)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/dtrace/chapter.xml	Wed Apr 16 14:01:55 2014	(r44576)
@@ -215,25 +215,43 @@ options		DEBUG=-g</programlisting>
   <sect1 xml:id="dtrace-using">
     <title>Using &dtrace;</title>
 
+    <para>&dtrace; scripts consist of a list of one or more
+      <firstterm>probes</firstterm>, or instrumentation points, where
+      each probe is associated with an action.  Whenever the condition
+      for a probe is met, the associated action is executed.  For
+      example, an action may occur when a file is opened, a process is
+      started, or a line of code is executed.  The action might be to
+      log some information or to modify context variables.  The
+      reading and writing of context variables allows probes to share
+      information and to cooperatively analyze the correlation of
+      different events.</para>
+
     <para>To view all probes, the administrator can execute the
       following command:</para>
 
     <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>dtrace -l | more</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>This section demonstrates how to use two of the fully supported scripts from the
+    <para>Each probe has an <literal>ID</literal>, a
+      <literal>PROVIDER</literal> (dtrace or fbt), a
+      <literal>MODULE</literal>, and a
+      <literal>FUNCTION NAME</literal>.    Refer to &man.dtrace.1; for
+      more information about this command.</para>
+
+    <para>The examples in this section provide an overview of how to
+      use two of the fully supported scripts from the
       &dtrace; Toolkit: the
       <filename>hotkernel</filename> and
       <filename>procsystime</filename> scripts.</para>
 
     <para>The <filename>hotkernel</filename> script is designed to identify
-      which function is using the most kernel time.  Run normally, it
+      which function is using the most kernel time.  It
       will produce output similar to the following:</para>
 
     <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/share/dtrace/toolkit</userinput>
 &prompt.root; <userinput>./hotkernel</userinput>
 Sampling... Hit Ctrl-C to end.</screen>
 
-    <para>The system administrator must use the
+    <para>As instructed, use the
       <keycombo action="simul"><keycap>Ctrl</keycap><keycap>C</keycap>
       </keycombo> key combination to stop the process.  Upon
       termination, the script will display a list of kernel functions
@@ -272,8 +290,7 @@ kernel`sched_idletd                     
 	how we should look that up. -->
 
     <para>This script will also work with kernel modules.  To use this
-      feature, run the script with the <option>-m</option>
-      flag:</para>
+      feature, run the script with <option>-m</option>:</para>
 
     <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>./hotkernel -m</userinput>
 Sampling... Hit Ctrl-C to end.
@@ -297,10 +314,10 @@ kernel                                  
 	seriously obvious.  It is 5AM btw. -->
 
     <para>The <filename>procsystime</filename> script captures and
-      prints the system call time usage for a given
-      <acronym>PID</acronym> or process name.  In the following
+      prints the system call time usage for a given process <acronym>ID</acronym>
+      (<acronym>PID</acronym>) or process name.  In the following
       example, a new instance of <filename>/bin/csh</filename> was
-      spawned.  The <filename>procsystime</filename> was executed and
+      spawned.  Then, <filename>procsystime</filename> was executed and
       remained waiting while a few commands were typed on the other
       incarnation of <command>csh</command>.  These are the results of
       this test:</para>
@@ -331,8 +348,8 @@ Elapsed Times for processes csh,
       sigsuspend            6985124
             read         3988049784</screen>
 
-    <para>As shown, the <function>read()</function> system call seems
-      to use the most time in nanoseconds with the
+    <para>As shown, the <function>read()</function> system call
+      used the most time in nanoseconds while the
       <function>getpid()</function> system call used the least amount
       of time.</para>
   </sect1>



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