Date: Mon, 2 Aug 2004 22:27:25 -0400 (EDT) From: Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Cc: eik@FreeBSD.org Subject: ports/69935: [PATCH] English nits in portaudit.1 Message-ID: <20040803022725.26DC4FE02@www.reppep.com> Resent-Message-ID: <200408030230.i732UJVo035529@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 69935
>Category: ports
>Synopsis: [PATCH] English nits in portaudit.1
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-ports-bugs
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Tue Aug 03 02:30:19 GMT 2004
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Chris Pepper
>Release: FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD www.reppep.com 4.10-STABLE FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE #16: Wed Jul 21 18:25:39 EDT 2004 root@www.reppep.com:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/REPPEP i386
>Description:
Portaudit has some confusion over subject-verb agreement, and the description is overly restrictive.
>How-To-Repeat:
man portaudit
>Fix:
Here's a suggested patch.
--- portaudit.1.diff begins here ---
--- portaudit.1 Mon Aug 2 22:20:43 2004
+++ portaudit.1.fixed Mon Aug 2 22:21:32 2004
@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@
DDEESSCCRRIIPPTTIIOONN
ppoorrttaauuddiitt checks installed packages for known vulnerabilities and gener-
- ates reports including references to security advisories. Its audience
- are system administrators or individual users.
+ ates reports including references to security advisories. Its intended
+ audience is system administrators and individual users.
ppoorrttaauuddiitt uses a database maintained by port committers and the FreeBSD
security team to check if security advisories for any installed packages
--- portaudit.1.diff ends here ---
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
>Unformatted:
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