From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Feb 15 03:46:03 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx2.freebsd.org (mx2.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::35]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 395A41065670 for ; Wed, 15 Feb 2012 03:46:03 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from dougb@FreeBSD.org) Received: from 172-17-150-251.globalsuite.net (hub.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::36]) by mx2.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9A1A314DB18; Wed, 15 Feb 2012 03:46:02 +0000 (UTC) Message-ID: <4F3B2A7A.3030505@FreeBSD.org> Date: Tue, 14 Feb 2012 19:46:02 -0800 From: Doug Barton Organization: http://SupersetSolutions.com/ User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; FreeBSD i386; rv:10.0.1) Gecko/20120213 Thunderbird/10.0.1 MIME-Version: 1.0 To: Eitan Adler References: In-Reply-To: X-Enigmail-Version: 1.3.5 OpenPGP: id=1A1ABC84 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: CfR: config chapter changes X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 15 Feb 2012 03:46:03 -0000 On 02/14/2012 19:36, Eitan Adler wrote: > What about the following? For my taste it's still a little too wordy .... In looking this over I have some ideas, but can't really put work into it right atm, is updating this urgent? If not, what's your time frame? Doug -- It's always a long day; 86400 doesn't fit into a short. Breadth of IT experience, and depth of knowledge in the DNS. Yours for the right price. :) http://SupersetSolutions.com/