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Date:      Tue, 14 Feb 2012 19:46:02 -0800
From:      Doug Barton <dougb@FreeBSD.org>
To:        Eitan Adler <lists@eitanadler.com>
Cc:        freebsd-doc@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: CfR: config chapter changes
Message-ID:  <4F3B2A7A.3030505@FreeBSD.org>
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On 02/14/2012 19:36, Eitan Adler wrote:
> What about the following?

For my taste it's still a little too wordy .... In looking this over I
have some ideas, but can't really put work into it right atm, is
updating this urgent? If not, what's your time frame?


Doug

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