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On August 30, 2009 10:39:47 am Daniel Gerzo wrote:
> Hello guys,
>
> I am seeking for documentation, language and grammar review for a new
> article describing steps required to use custom gcc from ports. The
> article has been written by mm@ and I have just sgml-fied it. As both
> Martin and me are not native english speakers, I would like someone to
> review it before I do the commit. It has gone through a quick review
> already, but an additional work may be still required.
>
> The diff is available at:
> http://people.freebsd.org/~danger/custom-gcc.diff
>
> Built version is available at:
> http://people.freebsd.org/~danger/gcc.html
>
> Thanks,

Hi Daniel

I have given it the once over, and the grammar looks good to me.


Thomas

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