From owner-cvs-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Jul 31 07:29:58 2007 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E46CE16A417; Tue, 31 Jul 2007 07:29:58 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from marc@blackend.org) Received: from abigail.blackend.org (ns0.blackend.org [82.227.222.164]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 44B1213C459; Tue, 31 Jul 2007 07:29:57 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from marc@blackend.org) Received: from gothic.blackend.org (gothic.blackend.org [192.168.1.203]) by abigail.blackend.org (8.13.4/8.13.3) with ESMTP id l6V7Tu7h059216; Tue, 31 Jul 2007 09:29:56 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from marc@abigail.blackend.org) Received: from gothic.blackend.org (localhost.blackend.org [127.0.0.1]) by gothic.blackend.org (8.14.1/8.13.8) with ESMTP id l6V7TuS6001372; Tue, 31 Jul 2007 09:29:56 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from marc@gothic.blackend.org) Received: (from marc@localhost) by gothic.blackend.org (8.14.1/8.13.8/Submit) id l6V7Tun4001371; Tue, 31 Jul 2007 09:29:56 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from marc) Date: Tue, 31 Jul 2007 09:29:56 +0200 From: Marc Fonvieille To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Message-ID: <20070731072956.GB1007@gothic.blackend.org> References: <200707310651.l6V6pkj3082173@repoman.freebsd.org> <20070731070613.GA1007@gothic.blackend.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20070731070613.GA1007@gothic.blackend.org> X-Useless-Header: blackend.org X-Operating-System: FreeBSD 6.2-STABLE User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.15 (2007-04-06) Cc: doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install chapter.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the doc and www trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 31 Jul 2007 07:29:59 -0000 On Tue, Jul 31, 2007 at 09:06:13AM +0200, Marc Fonvieille wrote: > On Tue, Jul 31, 2007 at 06:51:46AM +0000, Marc Fonvieille wrote: > > blackend 2007-07-31 06:51:45 UTC > > > > FreeBSD doc repository > > > > Modified files: > > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install chapter.sgml > > Log: > > - We now use 4 boot floppies > > - Correct a printed message to match what is really displayed > > > > I'm planning many other changes to this chapter: > > - Update of outdated screenshots; > - Various moves to match the order of current installation steps; some > parts are not proposed during the (standard) installation, we should > move them to an "Additional Installation Operations" section (or under > another title); > - Allocated space for /var should be closer to 200MB > - We talk about 100MB for / and the examples use 64MB... 64MB is > very short if one builds a new kernel > - Add missing installation steps: sshd config, ttys config, etc. > - etc. > > Hopefully, this should happen before 7.0 release. > In fact I'm forgetting the important: the architecture dependent parts. - Sometimes ago I reorganized the 2.2 Hardware Requirements section with minimal configuration notes for various architectures but I still miss informations for both arm and powerpc. - In "2.3.3 Decide Where to Install FreeBSD" we talk about i386 (and so amd64) and alpha disk layouts, is something needed for other archs? - In "2.4.1 Booting", same remark as for the "2.3.3 Decide Where to Install FreeBSD" section. - I think we should s/2.3.3.1 Disk Layouts for the i386/2.3.3.1 Disk Layouts for i386 and amd64 architectures/ and s/2.4.1.1 Booting for the i386/2.4.1.1 Booting for i386 and amd64 architectures/ - etc. -- Marc