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From: Marc Fonvieille <blackend@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: Re: docs/55923: [patch] articles/laptop: fix bad english + minor
	sgml issues
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Synopsis: [patch] articles/laptop: fix bad english + minor sgml issues

State-Changed-From-To: open->closed
State-Changed-By: blackend
State-Changed-When: Sun Aug 24 06:43:06 PDT 2003
State-Changed-Why: 
I committed a slightly different version of your patch: I did not do the
s/FreeBSD/&os; since it does not bring anything to the reader and does
not worth the "repo size increasing"; I, of course, did this change on
new committed/changed lines.
Thanks!

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=55923