From owner-svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Tue Dec 11 22:08:21 2018 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DD1BF1317976; Tue, 11 Dec 2018 22:08:20 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from ygy@FreeBSD.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "Let's Encrypt Authority X3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 8102A70B13; Tue, 11 Dec 2018 22:08:20 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from ygy@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 48AEB61C6; Tue, 11 Dec 2018 22:08:20 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from ygy@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.37]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id wBBM8K6s049282; Tue, 11 Dec 2018 22:08:20 GMT (envelope-from ygy@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from ygy@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id wBBM8KoG049281; Tue, 11 Dec 2018 22:08:20 GMT (envelope-from ygy@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201812112208.wBBM8KoG049281@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: ygy set sender to ygy@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Guangyuan Yang Date: Tue, 11 Dec 2018 22:08:20 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r52673 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/12.0R X-SVN-Group: doc-head X-SVN-Commit-Author: ygy X-SVN-Commit-Paths: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/12.0R X-SVN-Commit-Revision: 52673 X-SVN-Commit-Repository: doc MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Rspamd-Queue-Id: 8102A70B13 X-Spamd-Bar: / Authentication-Results: mx1.freebsd.org X-Spamd-Result: default: False [-0.69 / 15.00]; local_wl_from(0.00)[FreeBSD.org]; NEURAL_HAM_SHORT(-0.69)[-0.689,0]; ASN(0.00)[asn:11403, ipnet:2610:1c1:1::/48, country:US] X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 11 Dec 2018 22:08:21 -0000 Author: ygy Date: Tue Dec 11 22:08:19 2018 New Revision: 52673 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/52673 Log: Fix some typos in 12.0R announcement. PR: 233943 Reported by: Max Stucchi Approved by: gjb Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/12.0R/announce.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/12.0R/announce.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/12.0R/announce.xml Tue Dec 11 20:51:57 2018 (r52672) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/12.0R/announce.xml Tue Dec 11 22:08:19 2018 (r52673) @@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ emulation.

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    The bhyve(8) utility is now able to be run withing +

    The bhyve(8) utility is now able to be run within a jail(8).

  • @@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ booting into a "livefs" based rescue mode. This should be all you need if you can burn and use DVD-sized media.

    -

    Additionally, this can be written to an USB memory stick +

    Additionally, this can be written to a USB memory stick (flash drive) for the &arch.amd64; architecture and used to do an install on machines capable of booting off USB drives. It also supports booting into a "livefs" based rescue @@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ supports booting into a "livefs" based rescue mode. There are no pre-built packages.

    -

    Additionally, this can be written to an USB memory stick +

    Additionally, this can be written to a USB memory stick (flash drive) for the &arch.amd64; architecture and used to do an install on machines capable of booting off USB drives. It also supports booting into a "livefs" based rescue mode. @@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ perform a network based install (e.g., from an HTTP or FTP server) after booting from the CD.

    -

    Additionally, this can be written to an USB memory stick +

    Additionally, this can be written to a USB memory stick (flash drive) for the &arch.amd64; architecture and used to do an install on machines capable of booting off USB drives. It also supports booting into a "livefs" based rescue mode. @@ -241,7 +241,7 @@

    memstick
    -

    This can be written to an USB memory stick (flash drive) +

    This can be written to a USB memory stick (flash drive) and used to do an install on machines capable of booting off USB drives. It also supports booting into a "livefs" based rescue mode. There are no pre-built packages.

    @@ -261,7 +261,7 @@
    mini-memstick
    -

    This can be written to an USB memory stick (flash drive) +

    This can be written to a USB memory stick (flash drive) and used to boot a machine, but does not contain the installation distribution sets on the medium itself, similar to the bootonly image. It also supports booting into