From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Oct 14 16:01:09 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 613D1FA6; Sun, 14 Oct 2012 16:01:09 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::2c]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4003F8FC08; Sun, 14 Oct 2012 16:01:09 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id q9EG19Kx096078; Sun, 14 Oct 2012 16:01:09 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from wblock@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) id q9EG19Jh096076; Sun, 14 Oct 2012 16:01:09 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201210141601.q9EG19Jh096076@svn.freebsd.org> From: Warren Block Date: Sun, 14 Oct 2012 16:01:09 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r39750 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 14 Oct 2012 16:01:09 -0000 Author: wblock Date: Sun Oct 14 16:01:08 2012 New Revision: 39750 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39750 Log: Remove contractions, fix spelling errors and title capitalization. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Sun Oct 14 15:48:05 2012 (r39749) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Sun Oct 14 16:01:08 2012 (r39750) @@ -643,7 +643,7 @@ before running "/usr/sbin/freebsd-update - Portsnap: A Ports Collection Update Tool + Portsnap: a Ports Collection Update Tool Updating and Upgrading @@ -1767,7 +1767,7 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. - Do not use <command>make world</command> + Do Not Use <command>make world</command> A lot of older documentation recommends using make world for this. Doing that skips @@ -1932,16 +1932,16 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. - Note that if you're upgrading from one release of the same &os; + Note that if you are upgrading from one release of the same &os; branch to a more recent release of the same branch, i.e., from 7.0 to 7.1, then this procedure may not be absolutely necessary, since - you're unlikely to run into serious mismatches between compiler, + you are unlikely to run into serious mismatches between compiler, kernel, userland and configuration files. The older approach of make world followed by building and installing a new kernel might work well enough for minor updates. - But, when upgrading across major releases, people who don't + But, when upgrading across major releases, people who do not follow this procedure should expect some problems. It is also worth noting that many upgrades @@ -2965,7 +2965,7 @@ Building everything.. - Deleting obsolete files, directories and libraries + Deleting Obsolete Files, Directories and Libraries Deleting obsolete files, directories and libraries @@ -3049,7 +3049,7 @@ Building everything.. role="package">ports-mgmt/portmaster and ports-mgmt/portupgrade utilities can be used to automate this process. After you've made sure that all ports are rebuilt - and do not use the old libraries anymore, you can delete them using the + and do not use the old libraries any more, you can delete them using the following command: &prompt.root; make delete-old-libs