From owner-freebsd-doc Sun Sep 23 4:19: 6 2001 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mailsrv.otenet.gr (mailsrv.otenet.gr [195.170.0.5]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 643FC37B410 for ; Sun, 23 Sep 2001 04:18:58 -0700 (PDT) Received: from hades.hell.gr (patr530-a095.otenet.gr [212.205.215.95]) by mailsrv.otenet.gr (8.11.5/8.11.5) with ESMTP id f8NBIsF24501; Sun, 23 Sep 2001 14:18:54 +0300 (EEST) Received: (from charon@localhost) by hades.hell.gr (8.11.6/8.11.6) id f8NBIsJ18461; Sun, 23 Sep 2001 14:18:54 +0300 (EEST) (envelope-from charon@labs.gr) Date: Sun, 23 Sep 2001 14:18:54 +0300 From: Giorgos Keramidas To: Rahul Siddharthan Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: Re: docs/30749: Typo in the handbook's section 14.3 Message-ID: <20010923141853.A18308@hades.hell.gr> References: <200109230830.f8N8U1l60408@freefall.freebsd.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <200109230830.f8N8U1l60408@freefall.freebsd.org> User-Agent: Mutt/1.3.22.1i X-GPG-Fingerprint: C1EB 0653 DB8B A557 3829 00F9 D60F 941A 3186 03B6 X-URL: http://labs.gr/~charon/ Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org Rahul Siddharthan wrote: >Shill said on Sep 22, 2001 at 16:08:33: >> >> In the handbook's section 14.3: >> http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x13973.html >> >> "After adding the driver(s) you need to your kernel configuration file" >> -> delete "you need" (?) > > What's wrong with it as it stands? (I'm not sure whether, strictly > speaking, a "which" is required before "you need" but it's common > usage as it is.) ... "that you need", "which you need", are both valid alternate forms. But it seems ok as it is. Does this really have to change? -giorgos To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message