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From: Ceri <setantae@submonkey.net>
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>Number:         32578
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       A _really_ petty change to the front page of the website
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          change-request
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Dec 07 06:50:01 PST 2001
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Ceri <setantae@submonkey.net>
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.4-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD rhadamanth.private.submonkey.net 4.4-STABLE FreeBSD 4.4-STABLE #0: Wed Dec 5 00:48:29 GMT 2001 root@rhadamanth.private.submonkey.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/RHADAMANTH i386


http://www.FreeBSD.org
>Description:
	
The bulletpoint list on the home page of www.FreeBSD.org contains a list of
some of the good points regarding FreeBSD.

I believe that one of them therefore contains a grammatical error.
Consider the implied notions :

1. (FreeBSD has) Cutting edge features
2. (FreeBSD has) Powerful Internet solutions
3. (FreeBSD can) Run a huge a variety of applications
4. (FreeBSD is)  Easy to install

I don't like number 3.

Ceri

>How-To-Repeat:
	Visit http://www.FreeBSD.org in a browser.
>Fix:

--- www/en/index.xsl.old	Fri Dec  7 14:29:23 2001
+++ www/en/index.xsl	Fri Dec  7 14:33:16 2001
@@ -250,7 +250,7 @@
 		<a href="gallery/gallery.html">gallery</a> for examples of
 		FreeBSD powered applications and services.</p>
 	    
-	      <h2><font color="#990000">Run a huge variety of
+	      <h2><font color="#990000">Runs a huge variety of
 		  applications</font></h2>
 	    
 	      <p>The quality of FreeBSD combined with today's low-cost,
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
>Unformatted:

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