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Author: wblock
Date: Mon Jul 13 15:52:55 2015
New Revision: 46961
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46961

Log:
  Slight update to the summary to reduce redundancy.  We should reconsider
  whether the introduction really needs to summarize all the individual
  reports.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml	Mon Jul 13 13:27:06 2015	(r46960)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml	Mon Jul 13 15:52:55 2015	(r46961)
@@ -25,11 +25,11 @@
       June 2015.  This is the second of four reports planned for
       2015.</p>
 
-    <p>The second quarter of 2015 was another productive quarter for
-      the &os; project and community.  BSDCan was held in Ottawa in
-      June, and both it and the Developer Summit preceding it allowed
-      developers to plan for the future and discover what others have
-      already accomplished.</p>
+    <p>Another productive quarter for the &os; project and community
+      has passed.  BSDCan was held in Ottawa in June, and both it and
+      the preceding Developer Summit allowed developers to plan for
+      the future and discover what others have already
+      accomplished.</p>
 
     <p>Thanks to all the reporters for the excellent work!</p>