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From: Gabor Pali <pgj@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Fri, 31 Oct 2008 12:23:36 +0000 (UTC)
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-primer
	chapter.sgml
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pgj         2008-10-31 12:23:36 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-primer chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  Update the SGML Primer chapter in FDP Primer:
  - Eliminate a <blockquote> inside <para> (split <para> around <blockquote>)
  - Use <sgmltag> markup where possible
  - nsgmls does not always give error messages, just messages (those might
    contain information on errors)
  - Eliminate first person narration
  - Add missing full stops
  - Add a missing <literal> markup for CDATA
  
  Reviewed by:    blackend, danger, gabor, hrs, manolis, remko, trhodes
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.48      +16 -16    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-primer/chapter.sgml