From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jun 1 14:51:17 2003 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2D16D37B401; Sun, 1 Jun 2003 14:51:17 -0700 (PDT) Received: from pop016.verizon.net (pop016pub.verizon.net [206.46.170.173]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3EBF643FA3; Sun, 1 Jun 2003 14:51:16 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from jim@FreeBSD.org) Received: from envy.homeunix.com ([4.47.68.94]) by pop016.verizon.net (InterMail vM.5.01.05.33 201-253-122-126-133-20030313) with ESMTP id <20030601215115.UGRI3199.pop016.verizon.net@envy.homeunix.com>; Sun, 1 Jun 2003 16:51:15 -0500 Received: from FreeBSD.org (lust.pdx.soupnazi.org [192.168.1.2]) by envy.homeunix.com (8.12.8p1/8.12.8) with ESMTP id h51LpDcZ040826; Sun, 1 Jun 2003 14:51:14 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from jim@FreeBSD.org) Date: Sun, 1 Jun 2003 14:49:49 -0700 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII; format=flowed Mime-Version: 1.0 (Apple Message framework v552) To: Tom Rhodes From: Jim Mock In-Reply-To: <20030528114506.56fe32e6.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> Message-Id: Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.552) X-Authentication-Info: Submitted using SMTP AUTH at pop016.verizon.net from [4.47.68.94] at Sun, 1 Jun 2003 16:51:15 -0500 cc: FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: RFC: Quick review for an install chapter patch X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 01 Jun 2003 21:51:17 -0000 On Wednesday, May 28, 2003, at 08:45 AM, Tom Rhodes wrote: > Greetings, > > I've attached a patch for review. This should be a drop-in replacement > for the MS-DOS Q&A section in the troubleshooting section. Any > comments > would be of a great help to me. Comments/fixes below. I've snipped most of the diff out so it's easier to find them. + You first need too defragment your MS-DOS partition using the Windows™ "too" -> "to" + DEFRAG utility (go into Explorer, right-click on I don't think "DEFRAG" needs to be all caps, unless it's actually called that since it's not an acronym. + There is also a very useful product from PowerQuest called Maybe add a link to PowerQuest's site? + if you plan to add/remove operating systems often. It does cost money, and if + you plan to install &os; once and then leave it there, fips "It does cost money, and if you plan to install &os; once and then leave it there" -> "It does cost money, so if you plan to install &os; and keep it installed" + Double Space™ application. Therefor the file "Therefor" -> "Therefore," - jim -- - jim mock mij@{soupnazi|opendarwin}.org jim@{bsdnews|FreeBSD}.org - - editor in chief, BSD News: http://bsdnews.org http://soupnazi.org -