From owner-svn-src-stable@freebsd.org Thu May 18 16:24:12 2017 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-src-stable@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DADD6D73E56; Thu, 18 May 2017 16:24:12 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gjb@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 8BE381DA6; Thu, 18 May 2017 16:24:12 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gjb@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.37]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id v4IGOBLW013238; Thu, 18 May 2017 16:24:11 GMT (envelope-from gjb@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from gjb@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id v4IGOBPb013236; Thu, 18 May 2017 16:24:11 GMT (envelope-from gjb@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201705181624.v4IGOBPb013236@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: gjb set sender to gjb@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Glen Barber Date: Thu, 18 May 2017 16:24:11 +0000 (UTC) To: src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable-11@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r318468 - in stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1: hardware readme X-SVN-Group: stable-11 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-src-stable@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.23 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for all the -stable branches of the src tree List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 18 May 2017 16:24:13 -0000 Author: gjb Date: Thu May 18 16:24:11 2017 New Revision: 318468 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/318468 Log: Fix grammar nits. Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml ============================================================================== --- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml Thu May 18 16:24:10 2017 (r318467) +++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml Thu May 18 16:24:11 2017 (r318468) @@ -555,7 +555,7 @@ The following Sun &ultrasparc; systems are not tested but - believed to be also supported by &os;: + believed to also be supported by &os;: @@ -581,7 +581,7 @@ The following Fujitsu &primepower; systems are not tested - but believed to be also supported by &os;: + but believed to also be supported by &os;: @@ -620,11 +620,11 @@ is highly recommended to try to keep the formatting of this section consistent. - We give manpage references using the &man entities where - possible. If a driver has no manpage (and consequently no + We give manual page references using the &man entities where + possible. If a driver has no manual page (and consequently no &man entity, we simply give the name of the driver). Please avoid doing &man entity conversions unless you - know for sure that an entity and manpage exist; sweeps through + know for sure that an entity and manual page exist; sweeps through this file to fix "missed" conversions are likely to break the build. --> Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml ============================================================================== --- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml Thu May 18 16:24:10 2017 (r318467) +++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml Thu May 18 16:24:11 2017 (r318468) @@ -219,7 +219,7 @@ For any questions or general technical support issues, please send mail to the &a.questions;. - If you're tracking the &release.branch; development + If you are tracking the &release.branch; development efforts, you must join the &a.current;, in order to keep abreast of recent developments and changes that may affect the way you use and maintain the