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From: Peter Childs <pjchilds@imforei.apana.org.au>
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To: dwhite@gdi.uoregon.edu (Doug White), freebsd-doc@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: DOC SUBMIT: PPP Server Setup
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In article <51tabs$738@al.imforei.apana.org.au> you wrote:

: Hello!

 Gday!

: After dawdling around for three weeks :-), I'm ready to annouce that I
: have completed SGMLizing Jeremy Child's PPP Server documentation for
: Handbook inclusion. I think I've followed our standard DTD, but I'm a SGML
: rookie without a good style sheet.  

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: I've designed it with Section 10.X or 11.X in mind, it may require
: modification if you have other ideas on where to put it.  

 From what i can see of the handbook at the moment we have...

 12. PPP and SLIP
  12.1. Setting up user PPP 
  12.2. Setting up kernel PPP 
  12.3. Setting up a SLIP client 
  12.4. Setting up a SLIP server 

 which seems a little wierd.  I checked out the above mentioned document,
 and think its great - but user ppp can also be used in a server configuration,
 and enables support of pred1 compression, and other neat things...

 Perhaps we should restructure this section as

 12. PPP and SLIP
  12.1 Setting up a PPP client
   12.1.1 Using user PPP
     ... etc..
   12.1.2 Using kernel PPP
     ... etc..

  12.2 Setting up a PPP server
   12.2.1 Using user PPP
     ... etc..
   12.2.2 Using kernel PPP
     ... etc..

  12.3 Setting up a SLIP client
  12.4 Setting up a SLIP server

 Thoughts? Comments?  I'm quite happy to write up the document on using
 user PPP as a server if there is a need.

 Regards,
   Peter

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