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From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org>
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Subject: Re: docs/119463: [handbook] [patch] typo in printing/chapter.sgml
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On 2008-01-14 18:48, Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com> wrote:
> On Tue, 15 Jan 2008, Daniel Gerzo wrote:
>> Tuesday, January 15, 2008, 12:02:32 AM, Warren Block wrote:
>>> <para>You should also include the <literal>rw</literal> capability
>>>   so <application>LPD</application> opens the printer in read-write
>>>   mode.
>> 
>> Maybe something like:
>> 
>> <para>The <literal>rw</literal> capability should be also included in
>>   order to let <application>LPD</application> to open the printer in
>>   the read-write mode.</para>
> 
> That's a little passive, although I agree with removing "you should".
> Let's make it imperative:
> 
> <para>Include the <literal>rw</literal> capability so 
>   <application>LPD</application> will open the printer in read-write
>   mode.

That sounds cool.  Can I commit this version?  I think we have spent
enough time tinkering with a little sentence already.  It would be far
more productive if we wrote even _more_ documentation :)