From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Feb 11 16:17:19 2011 Return-Path: Delivered-To: doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BE379106564A for ; Fri, 11 Feb 2011 16:17:19 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from sonic2000gr@gmail.com) Received: from mail-ey0-f182.google.com (mail-ey0-f182.google.com [209.85.215.182]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4F4488FC14 for ; Fri, 11 Feb 2011 16:17:18 +0000 (UTC) Received: by eyf6 with SMTP id 6so1438574eyf.13 for ; Fri, 11 Feb 2011 08:17:18 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=domainkey-signature:message-id:date:from:user-agent:mime-version:to :subject:content-type:content-transfer-encoding; bh=Zy/GepYtmuimVqAHTa+gxWNR956ygn/AgNq2fc8L1Lk=; b=j6vxnRRDeR/u6VT39isDiaeTmWq+9NIZPKZE0WsqHf4esYMO/RbSPmq93F2cD5xv3V 7Nh3xnGRKmvmJukixmhH7/reX7y7uXSOSQ9FscDeg3x0MD8+onWhqZMtICs0lTjXFNWZ Xg5/1VM6LyODwQuGG3Qh09P8gG3zIHLIpcKDc= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=message-id:date:from:user-agent:mime-version:to:subject :content-type:content-transfer-encoding; b=OHkruCuWYK0nFDw5Pg1anyYmAM/vJKOi8O49KzhUa6ehlldoJ9cBq/C8Uxfj6vn6ds 896xySm7WUNy3XZlmoVeZP86i/SvYaSwWXcX2GLSw0jYwsrf/WSWNKImpmBedZ86Vt8p 2rrCrq6Wya07XTzJGv+sUVV0hha4Vgz2HDoKw= Received: by 10.213.7.138 with SMTP id d10mr587456ebd.55.1297439294504; Fri, 11 Feb 2011 07:48:14 -0800 (PST) Received: from [192.168.0.151] (ppp-94-69-59-210.home.otenet.gr [94.69.59.210]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id x54sm809907eeh.23.2011.02.11.07.48.12 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=OTHER); Fri, 11 Feb 2011 07:48:13 -0800 (PST) Message-ID: <4D555A4E.8040203@gmail.com> Date: Fri, 11 Feb 2011 17:48:30 +0200 From: Manolis Kiagias User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; U; Linux x86_64; en-US; rv:1.9.1.16) Gecko/20101226 Icedove/3.0.11 MIME-Version: 1.0 To: "doc@FreeBSD.org" Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-7; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Cc: Subject: Call for a final review: freebsd-update Server article X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 11 Feb 2011 16:17:19 -0000 Hey all, This is a call for a final review of the freebsd-update server article ("Build Your Own FreeBSD Update Server") that has been in our PR queue for way too long (unfortunately). It was submitted by Jason Helfman on 2009 and there were more than a few reviews, patches and changes back then by numerous people. It was never committed though, as we were plagued by licensing / legal issues which are now resolved. In the meantime the article was also published in BSD Magazine and Jason has further refined the text and the procedure so it should be even more clear now. I believe this is going to be a valuable article for our documentation set, esp considering that people who manage FreeBSD servers tend to have quite a few of them :) Here is the final html build of the article: http://www.freebsdgr.org/all/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/index.html and you can grab the sgml file from my mercurial repository here: http://mercurial.freebsdgr.org/mercurial/freebsd-doc-el/file/tip/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server Please concentrate your comments on the content rather than whitespace or formatting of the SGML source. I will prepare the source to Doc Project standards before committing. Thanks in advance, manolis@