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Date:      Sat, 2 Jun 2012 16:50:05 -0600 (MDT)
From:      Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
To:        Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org>
Cc:        svn-doc-head@FreeBSD.org, svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.org, doc-committers@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   Re: svn commit: r38967 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config
Message-ID:  <alpine.BSF.2.00.1206021648380.97625@wonkity.com>
In-Reply-To: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1206021552430.97625@wonkity.com>
References:  <201206022143.q52LhBiJ015607@svn.freebsd.org> <4FCA89B2.9030704@FreeBSD.org> <alpine.BSF.2.00.1206021552430.97625@wonkity.com>

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On Sat, 2 Jun 2012, Warren Block wrote:

> On Sat, 2 Jun 2012, Benedict Reuschling wrote:
>
>> Am 02.06.12 23:43, schrieb Benedict Reuschling:
>>> Author: bcr
>>> Date: Sat Jun  2 21:43:10 2012
>>> New Revision: 38967
>>> URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/38967
>>> 
>>> Log:
>>>   This change adds much more information about syslogd and newsyslog
>>>   than we had before in the configuration chapter. It describes how
>>>   the system logger can be configured, the rationale behind it and
>>>   the most important field that the user should edit.
>> 
>> Argh, this should read "fields", as there are many fields to edit, of
>> course. ;-)
>
> Also needs another comma:
>
>  It describes how the system logger can be configured, the rationale
>  behind it and the most important field that the user should edit.
>           ^
>
> Justification: "Use the serial comma" in
> http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.html#WRITING-STYLE

This is what happens when I try to do too many things at once.  Sorry 
about that.



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