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From: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
To: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: Re: svn commit: r38967 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config
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On Sat, 2 Jun 2012, Warren Block wrote:

> On Sat, 2 Jun 2012, Benedict Reuschling wrote:
>
>> Am 02.06.12 23:43, schrieb Benedict Reuschling:
>>> Author: bcr
>>> Date: Sat Jun  2 21:43:10 2012
>>> New Revision: 38967
>>> URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/38967
>>> 
>>> Log:
>>>   This change adds much more information about syslogd and newsyslog
>>>   than we had before in the configuration chapter. It describes how
>>>   the system logger can be configured, the rationale behind it and
>>>   the most important field that the user should edit.
>> 
>> Argh, this should read "fields", as there are many fields to edit, of
>> course. ;-)
>
> Also needs another comma:
>
>  It describes how the system logger can be configured, the rationale
>  behind it and the most important field that the user should edit.
>           ^
>
> Justification: "Use the serial comma" in
> http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.html#WRITING-STYLE

This is what happens when I try to do too many things at once.  Sorry 
about that.